I like this. Please continue.

This story shows a lot of potential and originality, but two years? Makes me think I won't see the end of this story at that pace...would be such a waste...

Oh wow, you really know how open a fic with suspense and just keep it going! I was hooked the moment I read that first line, that was so great! It's very rare to find a writer that can do that, snag you just in a few opening words.

yay a new chapter! way to add in the suspense there! please update soon!

Great chapter!

Kinda short, really, but oh well.

Jecht's one of my favorite characters ever so I always love it when people portray him well. You made me happy!

Please up-date soon!

Huh? This is a little strange...but I like strange. So you based Tidus' form off of Leviathan or Bismarck? Huh, I wonder where Yu Yevon is? For that matter, where is everyone else and considering that the people exist and realize there was an attack in Zanarkand by Sin, then wouldn't the people be truly sentient and thus actually exist...whatever, update soon please!

Lol, Tidus has a fanboy.

I like this story better and better with every chapter. (And I liked it a lot from the start.)

Hope you can up-date again soon! I can't wait to read more!

I like the story. Hope to see more soon.

Oohh how is this going to resolve itself? Yow! I like the plot twisties!

yay finally an update! great chapter! please update again soon!

Hey,

You have a good idea going on here and you write pretty well. This isn't a plot I've seen handled this way before, so points for originality!

You might want to get someone to beta read or maybe do a read-through yourself before you post, though, just to edit, because you have a lot of spelling mistakes and stuff in your writing. Just some of ones I noticed in this chapter were:

'May I offer this than' - here, it should be 'then' not 'than' as 'than' is used to compare e.g. more than/less than.

and 'He seamed stunned' - here it should be 'seemed' not 'seamed' as a 'seam' is a join, like where the stitching is on your clothes.

And I though I should just point out that you've been spelling Kimahri's name wrong (Kimahri not Kilmari).

You've got a lot of potential - I'd love to see where you're going with this. Hope you continue writing this fic!

...the end of this chapter.. my brain.. it breaks x_x

am i SUPPOSED to know why he's back in zanarkand, or is it purposefully unclear? or is it just a flashback?

..sorry, i'm easily confused xD

but i love it! this is a really unique, well written piece of brain candy. ;p

can't ask for more than that! ...except maybe some fluff. because who does love a good dose of cuteness? :3 BUT some serious stories, like this one, may not exactly mix well with fluffiness, so it's PERFECT as is, haha.

can't wait for the next installment.

This fic is awesome.

Please up-date soon!

i love this story! i can never find any good final fantasy X fan fics and this one sounds great! please update soon! and can you recommend any other final fantasy X fan fics?

I'm not.. entirely, 100% sure if I know all that's going on, lol, but i like it! mucho.

I love that you used several different perspectives, all of which are very well done.

Definitely looking forward to a new chapter! I really hope you don't abandon this fic.

...although I would understand, since the only thing that ever seems to get any attention in this fandom anymore is craptastic high school fics -_- lulz. BUT STILL, PLEASE DON'T xD;;