Really liked it and I brought it to my friend so she can read it. Keep up the great work

this is just so goddamn cute! i rather adored it. it is well written too, which is rare enough to comment on. love from toni.

Hahaha

This was Great!

I loved the 'He leaned back against the wall and murmuring, “This seems comfortable,” started to slide down the wall, his eyes closing.' bit. I could just imagine it

Hehe

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aw how cute! i love it!

I loved it!

oh yes, I think that miss life coach WILL be very happy! XD

:P

please update?

This was really cute! I enjoyed it, and I'm not usually one who reads this pairing. I do have a few suggestions, though.

I noticed a few times that you have two different people speaking within the same paragraph. Generally, when a new person speaks, they get their own paragraph. For example, you wrote:

"“What in the name of seven hells was all that about, Malfoy?” Malfoy sniffed. “I awoke a while ago..."

"I awoke a while ago" should have been the beginning of a new paragraph. Because of this, some - not all! - of your paragraphs were a bit on the long side.

My last point is that I wish you added a bit more between Draco talking to Ginny, and Harry and Draco getting together. It just seemed a bit quick and rushed.

With all that said, I did like this - especially "Unhand me at once, Potter."! I hope you write more :)