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Interesting. I am wondering what's going to happen next. Hope you haven't given up on this story.

nice i'm glad i found this my fav tv show crossed with my fav alien robots awesome!

Awsome frist six chapters well done please update soon.

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Love evil!Galloway... wait! There is only evil!Galloway. Has there ever been a good!Galloway? Must... not... dwell... on... the... impossible! Must... stop... talking... like... William... Shatner! Must have more secret-evil-government-conspiracy-drama-that-makes-the-Decepticons-look-as-cute-as-the-nyan-cat!

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If the above did not turn out the way it should then I hold no responsibility because I was possessed by the awesomeness that is NYAN CAT!

Even Slipknot was possessed by the awesomeness that is NYAN CAT!

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Ooooh, very nice so far. I love the fact that Abby is getting a whole story for herself after she was not able to see much of the 'bots in the prequel. And she has certainly fun causing havoc on the NEST base. Not that she would ever do so intentionally.

And in all honesty, after getting through this chapter I decided that Galloway should be thankful it is Abby taking her vacation here (not that he is aware of her yet) and not Gibbs. I am sure our all favourite Gunny WOULD have shot him already. XD

Well, thins started to get really interesting now and I can't wait to find some nice free time to continue reading.

There is one thing I noticed though, that left me a bit disturbed and sad. In the other story, Jazz was resurected and while I at first wondered who you would work that one out with the Egypt arc, I now had to realise he seemed to have vanished. After all, in the movie Jazz was made second in command, surely he should have been at the important meeting. Not to mention with Jazz's love of culture I would have expected him to get on REALLY well with Abby and her own part of culture and the music she likes to listen to.

All in all it's just that Jazz is one of my favourites and therefore I noticed him missing and thought I point it out. Other than that I love this story so far and I am looking forward to read the rest. Hopefully you have not given up writing on it yet? I noticed the story is marked incomplete and the last update has been some time ago.

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /_\

This is so awesome... please don't forget about this one... I love the LA team... but you can't forget Deeks ok? or, uh oh dang whatshername... the chick who works with Eric now... Oh thats right Nel that's it... don't for get Nell...

More ass kicking Autobot action please

"That was en-en-en-" LOL Well, I doubt that defence will hold up in a court of law. ROFL

Nice integration of the storylines. I've never been a huge fan of NCIS, but I like how you're bringing in the Transformers. I'm betting that 'part' was an Allspark shard?

Definitely looking forward to more, especially if it involves moronic criminals like these. XD

Keep up the awesome work!

took me a minute to remember who G and Sam were. awesome chapter! you brought in NCIS LA! sweet! Keep up the great work. And yes, I'm still here reading your stories. :D

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from Ch. 6 Author's Note: 'Hookay. Onward. Apparently, this has become a two and a half way crossover, since this chapter includes some of the gang from NCIS: LA. I say two and a half because NCIS and NCIS: LA are not two completely different franchises. So, it's like having two brothers and a random friend all partying together, I guess.'

Y'know, toss in JAG and it'll be a family reunion (considering it was JAG that got NCIS, and later on NCIS: LA, going)

Haven't kept up with the previous chapters, but I did save a copy to my FlashDrive to read later. And, if they're as good as the 'quick scan' I did on this chapter, I'll have another two thumbs up popping up on one of the older chapters.

bless you Gix. And oh isn't this interessting. Man, Gally is beyond stupid!

Really nice! Loved how you added them in and got their characters right. Great job and looking forward to more!