I absolutely LOVED this story! Such amazing writing and most definitely made me cry happy and sad tears! So wonderful! Thank you for writing this amazing story!

Hey !

Thanks for your story ! I enjoyed read it. I must confess... I cried when Jake died x)
Thanks again !

I still love this chapter. All those emotions.
For once I don’t think Embry is being an ass. It isn’t easy to let go of feelings without closure, even if it is his fault he hadn’t had one.
And it isn’t easy to let go as soon as you realize that it is your fault that it all went to hell.
I like his moment of clarity. “She stopped caring when I stopped caring“
Makes me feel like he is more angry at himself and just projects it in Bella and Jake.
Probably doesn’t help that she is happy and he isn’t.

So, got back to reading it one more time after discovering the prequel.

I must say so far, after reading how she and Embry got together, I read the story with different eyes.
I still think Embry was an asshole in college that took her for granted. Guess now I understand why he broke down like that after the break up, even though he ignored her so much.

Anyway, I was pretty indifferent towards Jake in the prequel, but man do I love this Jake in FC. One of my favorite Jakes in FF.
That been said, this chapter proves why he deserved to get the girl.
And reading again made me realize the one thing I didn’t like in this story. He says that he doesn’t care because he raised him and he has his name. If I remember correctly later on he just becomes Embry’s son.

I know why you did it. Having read the sequel I know that it was always going to be an Embry/Bella story with a twist. Showing us about timing, how life can cheat you and and and.

But honestly, Jake is an amazing guy. He will die way before thirty after suffering. He found out his son isn’t his biologically and took it like a trooper (I really wished he was his...that would have given a chance for Embry to prove himself later on and would have given Jake something).

I wish the kid would stay Avery Black, Jacob Black‘s son and Embry‘d be like a second father. Damn I would keep it that way in his honor if I was Bella. Cause he deserves it even when gone. And yes, he never would know, but it would show that he mattered to her and she was grateful to this amazing man.
I kind of am dreadful to that part of the story. The part where it feels like Jake is just replaced and forgotten. At least that’s the feeling I got last time I read it. Maybe it’ll be different that time.
Im all dir the “living with the living and the dead with the dead“, but damn you can move on and still keep pieces of them.

Aaanyway, enough with my ranting. That’s really my only issue and it’s a personal opinion.
I love it still. It’s a masterpiece and it probably won’t be the last time I read it.
I know it’s not easy to write something so sad, you really did good.
Now I’ll go grab some tissues and keep reading.
Thanks for sharing it!

thank you for a beautiful and touching story.i know what its like to lose someone you love to cancer.i lost my mom over four years wwas very fast. what happened at jakes and bella last time together also happened .something came up and my dad left to take care of something,while he was gone she passes thought it was her way of sparing him that glad that bella got to love both her guys.

I still kinda wish Jake would show up and keep an eye on his family?!

It's sad but I understand where Thayer coming from. Is them being together part of the promise that embry. ade Jake?

I just hope Bella doesn't forget about Jacob?

Poor Jacob.

Poor Jacob, he shouldn't be forgotten!

Wow, I know the feeling, when you think you hear or feel the touch of someone, you've loved has passed. They become your guardian angels forever.

Will Bella ever get over the pain of losing Jacob? As long as she never forgets him?

I hope Bella doesn't kill herself.

Not crying? That's never going to happen. ;)

Yeah, Embry sure the he'll needs a kick in his ads!