Are you planning on continuing this or is it going to remain a one shot? Because it is a very good plot!

Oh, Carol, Carol.

Dearie, she's missed out on quite the adventure.

Kudos to your one-shot. I adore the Alice and Hatter pairing.

"oh crap" -perfect last lines! lol

Oh poor Carol.

She must be so unbelievably confused. And poor Hatter, with a first impression like that, I have a feeling there will be quite a few Monster-in-law stories to follow. I love this. :) Makes me giddy with cuteness and awkwardness and Hatter love!

xD This is absolutely hilarious! After my small squee-fest over the last scene, my mind was totally thinking "How do you explain that to Carol?". I think you explained it perfectly. Well-written and most definitely in character. Faving _

Wow, nice.

I loved it!

Your writing style is really nice and I like the whole situation!

I guess they might even react like that )

Well, we won't know... Only if they may do a little continuation to part 2...

Yumi

haha, omg this is so funny! :) However, I am sad that this is a oneshot :( Please write more!

I didn't notice Carol'sface until the second time i watched Alice, but it was BEYOND priceless. I could just imagine what was running through her head, and this was practically it. Adorable!

I ADORE THIS! Excellent in all areas. Writing, Characterization, etc. Carol's face during the closing moments of the show was classic and this is an excellent addition! Adding to faves and sharing with those interested. It's so difficult to find a decent fic nowadays!

LOL nice! I love this XD

WHOOPS! Kinnda forgot about her didn't we? Too cute.

Aww... There's not much to say here, but that! Lol. Super cute and fluffy. :P Totally awesomeness! xD

Finally, a well-written, truly enjoyable "Alice" fic. I am completely smitten by the Hatter, and I have been searching for some good fics for him- you are the first one I've found. Nice work :)

lol! this was very cute! Thanks so much for sharing! I liked Alice's little personal commentary about their relationship while the conversation is going on around her 3 Excellent job!

I love it! I could totally see that happening. I wish that they showed what Carol said after they kissed. It would have been hilarious and adorable I'm sure.