this is a great series. but its the queens GAURDdog not watchdog. Oh! and its May-RIN not Maylene and yes the dash is included in the name. and i thought Jack took the wombs not the heart. but aside froom those bits i am absolutly loving this :)

Please do mooorrrreee! I have enjoyed reading this so much, I actually told myself off.

SSSHHHIIIITTT! Plot twist much

This is an amazing story. So clever, so passionate and endlessly beautiful, with twists that actualy made me speechless. I had an amazing time reading it, and your notes as well - they were as interesting as the chapters, I swear! :D I know the story is abandoned and will probably never see its end, but I'm so grateful for what you wrote. Thank God the last chapter didn't end at a terrible cliff hanger.

UPDATE PLEASE!

Hello I have never been so grateful to anyone as much as I do to you. Thanks for putting up such a masterpiece.i hope that there will be an update soon as I don't think that I will regain my peace of mind anywhere soon Till this fanfic finishes. I'm confident that I'll definitely reread, over and over again, it when It finishes. I feel like I had the time of my life reading it up till now. Please update. I hope you can tell me who you are in person or your fb account. I feel like I'll be a lot more closer to the mcs a.k.a. The contractor and the contracted.

Please continue this! It's amazing i couldn't stop reading!

Please...update...

oh no! this was such a good story,, please continue this off in 2017! much love

Please continue this. I love it! Your plot is so interesting i could not stop reading this masterpiece! Update soon! Thanks!

Hope to read more soon.

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Man...
Im going to truly miss reading these chapters...
In about 500 quality chapters of devils like to dance...
Your 23 chapters have pretty much flowed in comparison to that...actually...even more so!

You are such an expert writer...if my vocab was betyer id probably make a 70,000 worded list on all the positives in your story!
Its like...this story is a true master piece!
I mean u definitely have the smut lemon qualities, but thats not all...the length of the chapters are incredibly long, its like im watching a movie! I absolurely love it!
And then theres the fighting scenes, so feeaking descriptive, even with the gore, and thats harder than smut! To correctly write gore and fight scenes...ugh...u have to be a tre pro, and honestly...u definitely are!
Im so jmpressed, and so thankful that ive come upon this incredibky well written story!
So very thankful indeed.
The depoctions of ciel, both matching similarly to the anime, and throwing in humorous scenes...man...this is like the perfect anime! Literally! This should be kuroshotsuji's next sequel!
It'd definitelly fit in for all those yaoi, shounen, gore, horror, thriller/suspense, slice of life...pretty much all genres and traits!
This story.
Is an...
All arounf...
MASTERPIECE!
Gosh, i want to write more but...i dont want to take up the entire review page...

I just really want to let you know how amazing of a writer you are, and how much you've blessed us readers with such a graceful and elegant story!
Including many of the cast of Kuro, and some super cool OC's!

Its so beautiful, i cant stop crying at how amazing this story is!
Ahh...i...i just...cant believe its over.
I cant believe that theres even a writer out there of your calibre!
I mean sure theres hateweasel, you guys arefairly similar in writing styles, but you have more of the flavor of smut, while in my eyes...hateweasel has it jn humor.
But you're much more creative, with ciels voice box and the predicaments he's in with sebastian..you rven stuck with the schedule and the contract! THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY!
You didnt just nake a 23 chapter 8 billion or so story. ..u...were dedicated to it! And absolutely made it yours, and probay being the onky renowned writer of all of fanfiction to make a story such as this, involving all elements and putting it into one story.
Thank you for this amazing and wonderful story.
I will absolutely NEVER EVER FORGET this story!

I havr many future plans to re-read this story again, so soon infavmct, its just...addicting!

Have a wonderful life, oh great and brilliantwonderful writer!

Wow...just wow...so much backstory!
But how does this all relate to where ciel was in that "cage"...or...where hr was left at the doorstep of sebastians manor?
What about how ciel promised sebastian and seb promised viel that they wouldnt leave eachother?
Yet...ciel was in a cage...then found on sebastians doorstep...?

I cried.
Too much, cried oh so much...criedddd!
But.
I do like cis decision!
Very realistic I'd say!

I admire the thoughtfulness you added on when it came to the movement of the windpipe, that would further cause complications with ciels breathings, almost similar to that of the famous, "asthma".
Incredibly sjarp might i add, very wise!