Great story , nice to read something a little different, thanks for sharing

Loved this! Thank you!

Bella's flippant - and, at times, snarky - sense of humor is amusing, but her "Undeadians" caught me off guard leaving me cracking up. It's too bad Emmett followed after his petulant wife because he'd have been rolling at that term! :D

I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this story (generally ghosts aren't really my thing), but I loved the first chapter. One thing I'd suggest, however, is to perhaps have a beta proof read it as there are quite a few comma errors (I only mention it because it is a bit distracting and/or confusing at times).

Wow, this was fantastic. I lost sleep because I couldn’t put this down. This was such a unique and interesting concept and I loved it so much! Thank you for creating this

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*****

Great story. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Thought ghosts couldn't move about, certainly all the way to La Push. But that might just be a fallacy concerning the corporal community.

"Living impaired", best line I read in a long time. laughed out loud.

This is great. I love dead Bella, more personality than the original. [yes blasphemous]

WOW that happened. Cool

SAD But she's funny.

This is the first fantiction I’ve ever had to make me sincerely cry, you’ve got me bawling over here.

Loved it

Congratulations on this story! I loved how you build the characters and I was very happy that they have had a happy ending after a long afterlife of loneliness.