Reviews for Firesuite
Guest chapter 8 . 6/11
Please update..!don't take go from hikaru because of concussion..
ROUTE-L chapter 1 . 6/3
Please Uodate this story! What's wrong with you HNG writers? Writing a really good story but never finished it!
AlternateInverse chapter 7 . 2/29
Waiting for an update ;w;
TheAnswerIsAlways42 chapter 8 . 4/18/2019
I'm actually pretty curious if this concussion is going to be used as a chance for Shindou to come to terms with being Sai through some dreamscape/memory thingy. Like a conversation with Sai where they talk things out and Sai teaches him go and then fades away and Shindou wakes up and is like, I got this. Then he talks to people and actually understands his go and slowly sparks a true passion for the game that's completely his own.

Don't know if this is anywhere near correct but I hope it is. Thanks for writing and sharing this amazing story, it truly is wonderful!
Magikarp Karp chapter 8 . 1/4/2019
you still around?
Astrido chapter 8 . 12/26/2018
please go on with this. i really love yeongha and there's not enough stories out there with him.
cheers
Maya
Guest2 chapter 8 . 6/20/2018
I ADORE this story. You’ve done a wonderful job writing an alternative world that still fits the characters. Please DON’T try to follow the original anime/manga story line; I like your creativity in telling a different plot.

So it appears you don’t plan to complete this at all. Talk about a MAJOR DISAPPOINTMENT! You now have become part of the long list of fanfiction writers who start off with a great storyline but are not capable of bringing it to a engaging conclusion. So sad for you and your hopeful fans!
miss-abyss chapter 8 . 12/24/2017
It has been a year since you last updated. I hope your muse will inspire you to write again. I know personally after long stretch of time between updates can make one complacent and less likely to pick the story up again. Still I urge you to do so. It's such a fantastic fanfiction. Definitely one of the best for HnG. AU or not.
Demon-night24 chapter 8 . 9/22/2017
La contyyy no lo dejes xfaaa T.T ya estams en 2017 y me qde tan atrapada q me diern gans de gritar cuand vi la ultima actualizacn xfavor seguila ,me qde cn las ganas de saber q ocurrio , q le dijo a akira,como le afecto el golpe, si alguna vez jugara contrs mejin XD ashhh estt asdghdhd (no pued describirlo:/ ) esperare la continuacion , un abrazo y ojala sea este año T.T
emmalilly21 chapter 8 . 8/25/2017
Let me guess. He loses his Go ability because of the concussion? So predictable.
Guess chapter 8 . 7/16/2017
Love LOVE this story! I really hope you will be continuing this story rather than abandoning it. Course leaving it as a major concussion cliffhanger is not appreciated. :(

Since Shindo is Sai's reincarnation I hope you don't make the Sai aspect disappear like a ghost. The way you've been writing this is different; an AU story . . . I like it a lot. Please don't follow the HnG plot line and make the Sai connection disappear.

It would be interesting to see the change in Shindo be that he has fired up passion for the game to want to master it even though he still had Sai's reincarnated presence.

Update soon PLEASE!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
You spent way too much time waxing on about your oc Misaki, Hikaru's magical marysue perfect girlfriend. Got bored and had to stop reading this.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/16/2017
Quick comment, if it's not too late -

Please don't stretch out the impact that the concussion has on Shindou and his decisions. Character development is best when progressive, small logical steps depending on situation that add up to something greater.

Otherwise, fantastic story. Best in the fandom, really.
HonestPuck chapter 8 . 3/16/2017
UGH this is so GOOD! I love Hikaru no Go! Your writing is pretty much impeccable on both the technical and creative sides. I think you have done a really good job with nailing down each of the characters. I find this story both wonderfully tied to the original story and also very unique. I am so pleased to have read it and I hope more is to come. I will for sure be bookmarking it and checking in on it regularly. I can see it has been a while since this last installment so I hope you still have some inspiration to continue. I, at least, and very impressed with your work and look forward to more!
mrs. zala chapter 8 . 2/17/2017
...

I kinda expect something like this will happen. But not exactly like your version. Still, soon or later hikaru will have to choose.

Even so, between expectation and hope is different matter. I REALLY hope hikaru will not have to choose. At least, "his ability" as sai still intact until the end.

I really hoping that hikaru will learn about go, but with "sai ability" intact. That's what I mean. It feels not real right? (I'm a dreamer)

It seems I kinda decide that maybe... You decide to make sai disappeared. Hahaha. Sorry if I'm wrong. But my hunch say so.

Wait, to clear any future misunderstanding, whatever. I write before this sentence... That doesn't mean you have to follow it. This is NOT a disappointment. I just saying what I'm thinking, no sarcasm or further intention. Period.

Okay. I'm waiting with cold feet now... Which road you will choose, author-san?

Until next time,

Mrs. Zala
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