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   jon reeve chapter 1 . 10/4/2017 /Interesting; I like it. /The Senju and the Uzumaki seem to be the other split of the main line. With the Senju being the elder line over the Uzumanki. Funny how the Senju and Uzumaki remained relatively close compared to the Uchiha and Hyuga. The Senju and Uchiha fought, but there is no word on the two younger lines' interaction with each other. And though the 'eye' clans did not agree, they still came together under the older 'body' clan in Konoha, while the younger 'body' clan had it's own village in Ushio. /Were the 'body' clans loving but independent, while the 'eye' clans were selfish but interdependent? Or, are there deeper concerns and motivations to the clan politics? /Then there all the other 'eye' clans that are probably related as well. The other 'body' clans, such as the Kaguya clan, also come to mind. /So, the Senju(and Uzumaki), Uchiha, and Hyuga aren't just royalty within Konoha. They may be royalty in the entire chakra-using world as the four eldest lines, and progenitors to all other blood abilities. |
| my 2 guys chapter 2 . 2/2/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 2 . 8/10/2015 Cool beans. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 1 . 8/10/2015 Great job. Well done. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2014 Love is what strengthens them. Their control is very counterproductive to their true power. |
| Lazurman chapter 1 . 4/6/2014 Heh. I can see this as canon. It's a shame more of Japanese mythology hasn't been introduced in Naruto. |
| Dynamite on Cure chapter 1 . 4/30/2013 I love this theory/story thing you have here. Honestly, it also bugged me that the sharingan is so OP but the byakugan looks all "derpy" in comparison. I guess its true that villians always make the most "progress". Kind of like how female villains can do more than female heroes in terms of power and smarts. :( no one likes to portray Action Girls. Its always the Dark Action Girl anyone gives a flying flip about. :( |
| chocopaste chapter 2 . 11/28/2012 Yess! A sequel ! :D |
| chocopaste chapter 1 . 11/28/2012 AAWESOME STORY! (: |
| CrystalBud chapter 1 . 9/29/2012 that was a really good chapter, this story sounds really good :) |
| Crystal M. Key chapter 1 . 7/1/2012 This was awesome, thanks! |
| Nafsi-chan chapter 2 . 12/4/2011 Hmm that's a very interesting story. I like it! I can't wait to read more! |
| puffdadder chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 Oh my gosh, there's going to be some epic power up. HELL YEAH! |
| ldizzle chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 Why oh why would you make this a one shot. This is brilliantly written and such a cool concept to begin with. I truly hope that you will continue this story even if I have to wait until you've completed EFTHH... |
| ryudama chapter 2 . 6/6/2010 awesome one-shot |
