Great story. Jennifer Baratta

I like this a lot. Just a frank discussion and reaching the understanding.

Also, fun that Lochley was just waiting to get another reason to continue her feud with Garibaldi :)

While a cat fight would have been far more cheaply entertaining ;P This is fairly realistic, and i like how you wrapped Draal into that- it might be fun to see Lochley and Draal actually talking together- they'd be interesting to play with methinks! Great story.

I often thought there had to be more than that brief exchange made in the episode after Delenn found out about John's actual first marriage. It made sense that Delenn would want to know why it was kept a secret from her, and wouldn't have been happy that it was, so I suspect there may very well have been a clearing of the air off-screen later on. This was a good possibility of how it could have gone.