I don't normally review stories, but this one I had to make an exception for. I've read it TONNES of times and I always find it entertaining!

It's nice to find someone who also supports Almiashipping (supporters are few and far) and also likes the Japanese names better than the American ones. I mean, they've already had a Keith in the ranger series, and I don't think Kate really suits her name as much as Hitomi. The only one I actually don't mind if Kellyn's, but has anyone looked it up and realised it's actually a girl's name?

Sorry, I'm rambling on. About the story.

I like the plot and how it appears this isn't the first time Dazuru has got them into trouble, and Hajime seems to be the only one who remembers that. I could totally see a situation like this happening if Hitomi and Hajime were together in the game, or even if Dazuru had gone to Almia Castle with the player, but of course Nintendo doesn't like hurting its characters. Hajime's grim humour is entertaining and I loved the fluffy moment towards the end. I also loved it how Dazuru spoilt the moment by bursting into the kitchen and then not noticed Hajime's condition until after he had finished ranting. XD

Longest review I've ever done! Anyway, keep at it and I hope to see more ranger stories from a talented writer! ; )

aww man dazzle had to ruin it i thought hitomi and hajime were gonna kiss but ABSOLOUTLY AWSOME story love it

OMG I LOVE YOU!

This is my #2 most fave ship. To tell you the truth... all my fave ships aren't really popular...

BUT YOU ROCK! YOU MADE THE BIG THING I WAS LOOKING FOR :D

It was a really good idea, which led to an amazing story :)

Aww how sweet! X333

And don't worry Kellyn... I despised going through Almia Castle too. Hell THAT place is; even just GETTING there was a freakin pain in the butt. -.-

The Haunter attacks were rather... scary. So was Scyther's. O_O. Darker side of Pokemon within fanfics. XDD

I loved the Kate and Kellyn moment together... would've liked more fluff, heehee, but I'm a shipping-obsessed lover~ can't blame meh. :3

Poor Keith kinda getting shafted and forgotten in the end though - hilarious. XDDD

Yatta! Thanks for being one of the few people who has actually bothered to write Pokemon Ranger ship fics. They need SO much more love. X3

This. Is. The. Best. Almiashipping story I've ever read.

You are just damn awesome.

So... story is very well written, some humor, etc. I like the part with Hajime falling from thirty feet down (I'm so cruel).

Like with all of well written stories, i can see them in my head in anime mode.

So, you did a great job! :D

So kawaii!

Wow. This made my day, it's one of the few Almiashipping Pokemon Ranger stories I've read; these stories are virtually non existent next to Vatonnageshipping (I like that too though).

Awsome fanfic! I mean really, it was well-written, and I just really enjoyed it ! :D