Loved this imprint story. I’m sure I’ll read it more than once

How could his hired thugs get close enough to take pictures on the reservation without any of the pack not seeing two strange hokwat hanging around?

The lack will beat his ass to within an inch of his life when he comes after her,right?

So the bastard has daddy and mommy issues so he takes it out on soon his issues won't matter and other women will have one less prick to worry about. Paul and the boys need to explain to him,while they are beating his ass, that if you love someone you don't abuse them.
Paul needs to put on his big boy pants and talk to Bella and let her know she never as to be afraid again.

Let us get on to Jamie's ass Paul will find the guts to tell her what is what whether he will try to grab her when she is on the reservation or if she goes to town with some of the other imprints.
I think Emily ,and i guess Kim is an imprint now,needs to sit her down and explain to her what has happened between her and Paul so she is not so confused.

I have a feeling very soon that piece of shit will regret ever even knowing Bella Swan or ever touching her. then Her father needs a major ass kicking for not protecting his daughter and spending his free time fishing,hopefully.

They should be longer,there is no flow to them.

Is this Jamie her boy friend or husband? still curious why she doesn't want to contact Charlie? unless he doesn't care enough about her to arrest and jail this dickhead she was running from.

Cannot wait to find out what the back story Charlie is still the chief in this story why in hell is she not going to him if she is being abused? if he is too married to his job to help his daughter he is a major ass hole.

I felt too tired to say anything else.( just a little help) ;).
So who did Bella get into another bad relationship this time and why?
If she has run into the pack she has to be either in Forks or close to it.
so where is Charlie at?

Awesome story! Thank you for sharing.

So does she know jake? Is charlie friends with bella?

Really really really enjoyed the story 1 of the best I've read about Paul and Bella

Chapters could be longer.

Word of advice: if a person's really upset about a situation, they probably won't be able to narrate their experience so eloquently. It may be more effective (and believable) if you had given a brief description of the facts like "Jamie's the one I was running away from... He is - or was - my boyfriend. He was abusive...", and then followed it up with some emotion. For example, "Jamie's the one I was running from. He's my boyfriend; abusive boyfriend. I tried to run before but he caught up with me! He has people who help him out. They found me." (Bella turns to Paul). "That's why I have to leave. He's really dangerous. If he knows about you-"

You're welcome to paraphrase this example in your future works, if you like.