great chappy!love it...wonder what will happen to Pan...well please update soon.._

YOU"RE STUPID! 17 would never kill Bra! She's the only one hot or evil enough to have him! He would laugh at ugly tomboy Pan! Think about it! Ugly guy looking nobody pan or THE HOT PRINCESS

OMG! This is so brilliantly written! I love this story, considering the fact that I hate stories involving Pan. Rock on! Could you tell me when the next chap is out? I hardly come over here ( ). My addy's . Thanks and keep up the great work!

not my personal usual read, but still well written...you don't stumble over dialouge like so many authors. Isn't Seventeen the coolest? He makes a great good and the best bad guy! _~

how can seventeen be stronger than Vegeta or Trunks! Vegeta should be able to kick seventeen's butt. Good story though!

coo. it sounds intresting..

This is very interesting! I like it a lot. Please continue soon...