nice story love it!

Oh my gosh so cute! May's adorable, and the spelling! "speshil" Amazzing job!

Adorable story, love it 3

GAHHH MY FEELS

So sweet! _

Waaaaah haha this is so cute. May is so adorable!'n

Nice :DD

Woah. First of all, let me say that this is the single fanfiction I've read that's captured Gray's character so effeceintly that I can honestly imagine him saying these things in the games. I'm always a bit annoyed at how other fanfictions express him as a tempermental redhead who hates girls and explodes at people every 2 minutes who try to talk to him just for the sake of creating a 'love-hate' relationship which could be achieved in better ways anyway.

Anyway, aside from describing Gray's character very well, Claire's person was also done quite well. She was slighlty void of a personality, but not too much to make her seem inhuman.

Good luck in any future writting and thanks for the read!

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Omg I love this. SO much. :)

Sooooo cute! (fangirls) Gray's love confession was adorable, and I love how it goes three words, two words, one word... I adored this.

The end was definitely my favorite. May is SO cute. I love the way you write, never mentioned what words Claire wants but having it just as obvious all the same. The way it was set up was very nice, and I like the way you write.

aw that is SO cute! absolutley loved it :)

Well, it's not really the holidays anymore, but all the same its beautiful. :'D

CUTE!

Beautiful. :)