It's a huge shame this was abandoned, I love when gets girls that actually truly care for him on a soulful level I'm also glad he's got two now, yet again a huge shame it was abandoned

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

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I hope you'll update this story eventually! I've really enjoyed reading it over a few times over the years, and I wish to find out what happens in this alternate universe you've created.

You write Kurumi so well, and there are so few Kurumi fanfiction stories here, your story is one of the best ones in a long time!

Very cool story and well written. Kurumi is a gem and seeing how she interacts with everyone in Konoha is hilarious. Funny to see people get what they deserve without it being malicious in the normal way. Just malice in response. The Icha Icha Incident was well executed. I can't believe that no one has ever tried that before that I have seen. Certainly would be an amusing Omake if you created one. Otherwise, this is just a great read with a little known crossover that seems to deserve more recognition. Will definitely be following this as long as you continue to write it.

Keep them please don't forget HSD Naruto.

I have read all the previous chapters up to this point and I have to say well done sir, well done.
but I have a few questions I need to ask.
I really want to see Sasuke dig himself even deeper and become a even bigger asshole and eventually gain his part two tendencies after killing Itachi. So is Sasuke going to breakout of prison and join Orochimaru? Or is Danzo gong to pull some shit on the side to help Orochimaru by springing the brat?
On the topic of Uchiha, what are you planning for Itachi? With Sasuke in the slammer and a messed up psychopath will Itachi gain a pardon as he forced to kill his clan due to Danzo's actions and his brother turned out as crusty as a old wound? I like Itachi as he is one of my favorite characters and I would really like a redemption story for Itachi.

In regards to make this story original you have succeeded and hooked my interests.

This is very interesting story and I wish to read more!

I read this story a few years back on the crossover arc on this site but then it was mysteriously taken off couldn't find it there anymore glad this story's still around it's pretty good! so naruto is now saki's master guess that third steel angel karinka will be naruto's as well that one I don't care much for kurumi with naruto is fine they make such a nice couple in this story anyway please write more soon.

I launch a devastating attack "WEDGIE"
I'm enjoying the story and look forward to more but hope you eventually pair hinata with naruto

The main plot is good as is the spelling and grammar. You have issues with many of the minor plot points however which takes quite a bit from the impact your story could have. For example, when the Hokage arbitrarily declared the Uchiha's punishment. The council was making outrageous demands and he basically overruled them and ordered his punishment as was his right as the village is at it's core a military dictatorship. The very next chapter however, he has for some reason caved to the council's pressure, reversed his sentance and declared that the Uchiha get's a public trial. As shown that would TOTALLY destroy any respect that the Hokage commands in the village rendering him impotent and nothing more than a figurehead. It totally invalidates the position and the man holding the position. You could have gotten around this if you had a scene where concessions were made to him or shown a scene where reasons that a public trial would benefit the Hokage, the Ninja Corps, or the village as a whole. As it is the Hokage went from ruler of the village to glorified village secretary in one scene. Anyway, as I've said I like the overall storyline so I'll say overall it's a decent story, it just needs some polish with the minor plot points in order to make it better.

Happy to see you writing new chapters for these entertaining stories. Keep up the good work and hopefully your personal life situation gets better too.

Can't wait for the next chapter

This a very nicely written. It was a great story. You should continue it. I give it a 8.75/10