Reading this made me barf out skittles. It was an amazing story! I love the puns and the humour in it. It made me laugh and barf out pure, clean, fresh skittles. Then I ate them and they were delicious so I kept on reading this to barf more fresh, pure clean skittles.

Barf the rainbow. Taste the rainbow.

Love it. Really shows their relationship!

Awwwwwwww! That was so sweet! And Marth had dirty thoughts... Tsk tsk. Anyway, great story!

I did enjoy it. I would have cut back on some out of characterness. I mean as much freedom as you have in games, these are war men I don't think some of the dialouge was quiet right. Keep working on it and happy writings. :)

I'm not too familiar with this particular little corner of the FE fandom, but I thought I'd drop you a review, anyway. :) Marth and Sheeda sure don't get enough love.

One thing I noticed that bugged me was when you described characters as colors (ex: [Meanwhile, the blue prince stood]). I wouldn't call someone a blue/black/green/orange person depending on their favorite color or the color of their clothes. However, "the blue-haired prince", or "the prince in blue" would have been more suiting. :)

["Oooooo… Naughty, naughty, little Marfy! Tsk. Tsk." Cain teased, much to Marth's chagrin.] That was a bit...much.

Anyway, the story was cute, if a bit cheesy (though, everyone needs a nice helping of cheesy-fic every now and then). The title was a nice tie-in. I figured immediately it was intentionally written as "Marry", and I'm glad I was right. Keep up the good work and continue writing. I apologize for my less-than-stellar feedback. I'm not very confident re: Marth and Co., so I can't think of much to say.

Cheers,

-Manna

No reviews? Damn the Fire Emblem section is pretty cutthroat. Anyway let me be the first to tell you how enjoyable your story was! It was solid, entertaining, and none too many noticeable errors to detract from the experience. An overall solid piece of fiction and I thank you for taking the time to write it.