Wowza! What a story! I loved it. Awesomely written and i loved how u captured the characters personalities and gave them your own creative spin. It was at times dark and sad, but also emotional and sweet and i really enjoyed that. I have to say that the last sentence scared me a bit lol. I cant imagine Lucius or Hermione dying. Anywho, great writing! I hope you are doing well and that life is good as you haven't posted in a while. Thank u for your writing. :)

I think it is a good ending.
It’s difficult to write Hermione and Lucius. I was reluctant to read this pairing, but in a way Lucius seemed like a version of Draco in time-turner fics (I love those).

I haven’t read much of Hermione and Lucius (actually, only camnz fics, and yours was in their favorites), however, I think you wrote it well.
You made me want to look up Ginny and Severus.
Thank you!

I hated your Hermione. I understand the things she had to endure was awful but I don't think you managed to catch Hermione essence. She is so clever and brave. Where is this smartness?! And her lengthy monologues, is terrible.
She repeats the same stuff every time. And the "MudBlood MudBlood" he keeps repeating! It gets boring after sometime. Give her another name for God's sake. Granger or girl or something. Sorry if I annoyed you. In the end your story grabbed my attention, and that is what is really important and everybody has different taste. No hard feeling :)

*Stockholm

Absolutely in love with this story. My heart absolutely ached while I read this and I actually found a deep understanding of what stockholders syndrome feels like for a victim. This story was Rollercoaster of emotions for me and I really hope this had a sequel

Devastated that it is stopped here at chapter 24...it should be complete with 28 chapters!
Nooooooooooooooooooooo

That was intense.

Wow fantastic! This is NOT an easy pairing to write for but you did it so well. I gulped this down in one day and I’m not even sorry. Great job and I look forward to the sequel!

You constantly use 'than' instead of 'then'. You might want to read up on the correct usage. But as a simple guide you would say 'then' in the following sentence, 'his tone was rough but his hands were gentle, he smoothed them over her face, THEN he ran his fingers down her neck. An example of than, 'she would rather sleep on the cold floor THAN share a bed with the mercurial monster that was Lucius.

I read your story and I liked the way you wrote it. It was very well written. I liked many of the scenarios and the ideas you had.

I am glad you showed how abuse is like. Especially sexual abuse. However, I do not like that Hermione suddenly was OOC and had feelings for Lucius. And, as soon as their relationship became sexual, well he was all he could think of. I mean Lucius never even used Hermione's name. He called her Mudblood through and through. He abused her and raped her. I know Hermione had MAJOR Stockholm syndrome. But Lucius was so CRUEL in this fanfiction I find that Hermione in her heart should hate him. Also I don't think "provoking rape" is a thing. Lucius is a sadist and he liked doing that.

The first time Lucius raped Hermione. When he said "welcome to adulthood" I literally started crying. It was very painful seeing a character, even fictional, go through this abuse and torture. This racism for her being muggle born. And he even slaps her after the one time their is sex is "consensual." I feel that Hermione was not broken. I do think, sorry to say this, that you dumbed her down for your fic. You wanted this sort of fic so some things were completely OOC.

Yet, I did read it in one go because your writing was very good, you showed stockholm syndrome well enough to a point and I was curious what Hermione would do.

If there is a sequel to this story I truly want Hermione to inflict torture on Lucius. I just can't stand all the abuse she got. It was so racist, in wizarding standards, and so completely inhuman. I just want her to succeed in recovering from this and getting on with her life.

The actual couple in this story? Ginny and Severus.

Overall this was a good read, however, I was a bit disappointed because there wasn’t a happy ever after with romance and whatever but that’s just me. I usually don’t go for this type of story because I hurt so much for Hermione that I had to halt reading so many times, I felt her pain deep in my soul. But I loved it, Good job.

I Liked the turn of events.. .

HI GREAT BEGGINING

I love the story. You really know well how to depict the sex scene. It's dangerous but sexy.

Make Hermione become an assassin for the Order. Make her kill Lucius and torture Severus. Let's get a Weasely reunion. Hermione needs to be a stronger figure- let her understand that she had Stockholm Syndrome and vows revenge for her friends!