Really loved this fic, too bad there wasn't more of it

Ok, This story and this chaper in particular are amazing!
You are really, really talented!

The way you write their sexy moments is perfect, also because you don't use vulgar language that is a very good thing for me (I personally don't think that to describe a good sensual scene you need to use vulgar language) so this is an extra positive point for your writing.

I'm in deep love with Smallville Clois: they are and will be my perfect disgrace forever.
I'm Italian and I consider myself a beginner writer and your style is helping to get new more words (new remarkable verbs to picture more vivdly the love scenes) and I hope to learn better from you.

Now, I know that this story is old and, maybe, you won't get the chance to finish it but for me this is simply beautiful just as it is at the end of the chapter.

I don't have much time but I'm going to read your other Clois stories

Thanks

Clarica

Oh Dear God! This was something else! Especially the last chapter - phew!
I don't usually comment on stories from years ago but I couldn't resist here - this was simply too good! I just think it's such a pity that you haven't written more R/NC-17 stories, cause you're amazing at them. And unfortunately it's not easy to find an author who's good at mature rating.

Please continue this story it so funny and very sexy

SUPER HOT sexy scene and hilarious ending! LOVE IT!

Oh dear sweet Jesus that was hot... That was a fabulous little ditty you spun for us there. Bravo!

Oh dear... poor Clark, he's in the most awkward position of all time.

And may I just say that you write an absolutely PERFECT Emil? Which is good, because he's pretty much my all-time favorite semi-regular supporting cast member. Bravo, and I wan't wait to read the rest of this when I get home from class later today!

This was excellent. I loved the whole of it (tho i did skim the explicit stuff, which i tend to do so it's not personal) and wow..hot and fun. I literally barked with laughter at a number of parts but I do think the most funny bit was Ollie and Emil talking Star Wars. Oh man I was just in hysterics.
Def a fab read and really enjoyed it!

This story is hilarious and awesome! So sexy, and yet so funny. You did a really great job writing this! The characters were so spot on! I'm hoping you wrote a sequel...

Did they end up spending christmas together? ;)

great fic

hope you continue it

This fic does not have enough exposure. It's really really enjoyable. You portray Clois really well-because face it they are phenomenally sexy. I love the small appearances of jealous Clark when Lois comes onto Dr Hamilton and Oliver. Well not really comes onto them. But Clark isn't having any of it.

I thought the three guys together was hilarious. I also found Clark's resolve to be phenomenal. After all who can resist a hot and bothered Lois Lane. Clark has the will of titanium-steel doesn't cut it. Not one bit. The sex scene at the end was every bit as good as I was expecting. :D

I couldn't agree more with Lois' last sentence:D

Oh I laughed so much at this story. Good writing. Hope to read more on this story

Wonderful story...very sexy.

I LOVE this story. It is funny and sexy. Clark is amazing in this, in particular I enjoyed his interaction with Ollie and Emil. Have definitely added this story to my list of favs for re-read! Well done.

Lololol! This is funny and sexy as hell, well done, I likey. More soon I hope. I love Clark's arguments with Ollie, and that one they all had about sci-fi shows and movies was fantastic.