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Flashlight237 chapter 1 . 4/3
Wait, how was this uploaded in 2009 when this app was uploaded 4 hours ago?
JadeTyga chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Please Please Please PLEASE PUH-LEASE don't let me be to late to sign up, (whispers)please! I'm not in High School yet and I just need to know what I'm up against, hopefully I'm not to late.

Name: Jade "Blessing" Jones

Nickname(s):Jay, Angel, Cheeky

Age: 16 1/2

Gender: Female

Stereotype: the bi-polar angel

Description: about 5'7, slim with curves in all the right places, B-cup chest, brown skin, straight dark brown hair going just past her shoulder blades with China bangs, golden brown eyes, thick long black curled eyelashes, wears no make-up.

Personality: She is a sports finatic, but isn't a tomboy, acts like a girl, but isn't girly, I guess she's somewhere in between. The reason they call her the bi-polar angel is because when she's in class she's quiet and shy, but when she's outside she's out going, hilarious, and loud. She has a great sense of humor and is very laid back out of class, in class, it doesn't matter how many paper balls you throw at her, she won't budge. She is book and street smart, but is no plain Jane. She's also very hard not to like unless your heart is a black hole.

Everyday clothes: A fitting, Saints football jersey, dark blue Southpole plain skinny jeans, white Vans, gold hoop earrings, and a matching gold charm bracelet with silver charms.

Hobbies: plays Basketball, Softball, Volleyball, and runs Track. She loves watching football and her favorite team are the Saints. She also dances and cooks, and has won many competitions.

Paired up: She is single right now, but would love nothing more than to be in a relationship. She is very beautiful, and many boys have complimented her on her looks, but none seemed to fit her interest. She has never kissed anyone or been on a date T-T

Type: The type of boy she's looking for is someone who is just as fun to be around as she is. He has to have a sense of humor and is good looking, and is laid back, but can still be serious at times. He can't be a drug/party addict or is a criminal who won't respect her personal space(which she adores) and just flat out won't respect her as a person. He would be caring and sweet, but not all sappy or to clingy (Again, personal space).

Extra: She was born and raised in San Francisco with her father and step-mom along with two older brothers, and one 3 month old step-sister, who she always babysat. She acts like a girl, but loves sports like any other boy would. She is afraid of people in full-body costumes of child cartoon characters at birthday parties. The reason being is because "Well, you never really know who could be in there. It could could be anyone: Jason from Friday the 13th, Freddie Cougar, some weird circus freak, or worse, it might not even be a costume! Hey, don't look at me like I'm crazy, why I outta-"...heheh:) She gets along with almost anyone and is known as a social butterfly, but she doesn't get along with bullies or anyone mean, vain, crazy, shallow, you know along those lines. She hates Disney, Punk Rock, and Country music(she can't stand it), completly gidly squeally and shally girly girls, tomatoes, and dispieses Barney and Justin Beiber music(no offense) She loves the colors gold and dark grey, Elephants, Tigers, and Penguins, Horror (blood and gore), action, and comedy movies, hanging out with friends, and smiling. She's a teachers pet and gets A's and B's and is proud of it, but isn't all geeky on Sci-fi stuff. She also was a brown belt in Judo, but broke her master's left arm when she was 13:(

Okay, that's pretty muck it:) Please include Jade in your story, it's alot of work writing a description like this •3• Update soon and good luck! P.S.~ Your not alone, my cousin has Cancer too, he's in the hospital right now, God bless your hearts3

~JT_out:3
FrostisSpreadin chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Let me just say thank thank thank you so much for doing this I have been waiting forever to let my character have some action, so thanks a lot for doing this! I cannot wait to read it! 3 ONWARD!

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Name: Natalia Alen

Nickname: Most people (her family, friends) call her Kitten. People like Duncan or Noah when he gets in one of those terms of endearment moods would call her Doll-Face.

Age: 16

Orientation: Straight(not closed to moresomes though XD have to add it)

Birthday: December 3

Gender: Female

Stereotype: The Girly Choir/Inventor Girl(Natalia always wears blouses, dresses, skirts, etc and if she had a choice she would do nothing but sing or sit in art and create weird inventions(her favorite subject is Chemistry) and that is basically all she does, she sings in the hallways dancing(the waltz or the swing is her favorite 3)).

Birthplace:Born in- France, spent 5 years there and then 6 years in Finland and finally from then to now moved to and now lives in Toronto,Ontario; Canada because it has the biggest population, easier to make friends and easier to find a place to live. ((Has a french accent so long i(s) like in Fish are "ee"(s) and th(s) are "z"(s).))

Ethic: French and Finnish. Mother is French and Father is Finnish. Her parents (Tino & Arielle)travel around the world a lot as her parents are dancing instructors and go around the world teaching people dances and learning some new ones themselves. So her two siblings, her older brother (Issac) and her older sister (Yasmine) take care of her, Issac is still in college his last year trying to become a doctor[surgeon](4th year, makes him 21), while Yasmine has a career as a therapist for the last three years(She is 24) [Oh and her whole family is Wiccan]. (Whole family is supportive, kind, and they tease but never argue or if they do it ends swiftly and with laughing)

Appearance- She beautiful and cute

Height: I believe 5'1 (or one inch taller than Noah)

Weight: 108 lbs

Skin: Skin is pale with a bit of peach color

Hair: Natalia has platinum blonde curly hair (almost white) she usually lets it hang down(to her hips), but sometimes has it in a braid. She went through a rebellious faze, with the help of Issac and Yasmine, dyed the tips of hair blue, her bangs also hang or get pinned with turquoise or brown clips.

Eyes: Her eyes are a hazy grey with a hint of blue

Build:She has some muscles, she can lift about 66.4 lbs. Her chest is definitely noticeable, her bust size is a 36 C. It's

Bust: 36", Waist: 28", Hips: 38", and Butt: 14 3/4".

Body Shape: In-between, but a little on the lean side

Other: Got a tattoo with her siblings the same day she dyed her hair, Natalia got a bat wing on her left shoulder blade with snow flakes falling down in front and an angel wing on her right shoulder blade with musical notes and duct tape falling down in front.

Everyday Clothes: Natalia generally always wears a skirt of some kind, usually sky blue or turquoise, she has her light brown flats with a turquoise blue bow on them for short and medium skirts, and then her tall, calf length, white combat boots with 3 straps across them and a bow on each strap whole thing is dark blue, and the boots and flats have little sky blue dots around the top of the boot and half a sky blue circle in the center of the toe. On hot days she wears a short sleeved button-up chocolate brown shirt with a turquoise blue mini or knee skirt, her flats and her sky blue bow, around her neck and on cold days she wears a long sleeved white turtle neck with the same sky blue bow around her neck, and a long thigh length button-up turquoise jacket with dark blue cuffs and dark blue lining.

Gym Clothes- A form fitting white tank with sky blue spandex shorts.

Formal: Her formal wear is the dress in the follow link, but where the flower texture is and where the flowers lay those are sky blue, she also wears white gloves with a sky blue in her hair is the same sky blue flower on her dress with her ribbon behind the flower, pinning some oh her hair up(usually on the right side). Here's the link: (( . ))(Or just fancy french or finish dresses in general)

Jewelry: Both of her earlobes are pierced and her favorite pairs are her dangling snowflake earrings or her homemade dangling wii remote earrings.

Other: She wears a blue beret with a white bow on the right side. (( images/2008/08/13/bow_ )) The turquoise bow around her neck is always somewhere on her ((if not her neck)), it's a gift that cherishes from her siblings.

Personality: A stereotype for Natalia would have to be would probably be, "the Girly Choir/Craft Inventor Girl". Natalia always wears blouses, dresses, skirts, etc and if she had a choice she would do nothing but sing or sit in art and create weird inventions(her favorite subject is Chemistry) and that is basically all she does, she sings in the hallways dancing(the waltz or the swing is her favorite 3) Her family takes her camping so she loves the outdoors and doesn’t mind getting dirty, but has to keep up the girly usually spends her time in the house inventing something (she loves making book marks in her free time so she has extra),reading fantasy,mystery and romance novels,singing,or playing on her wii,ds,PS3. When everyone meets her, she first appears to be soft-spoken, always pouting and having a blush on her face, shy, and quiet, and trusting to easily, and fragile, giving her the name Doll-Face. Natalia seems to trust easily but she actually is observing everyone and using logic and observation to see who is friend or foe. Natalia is still soft-spoken, she’s a pacifist and hates fighting unless its in defense and no one gets seriously injured, she starts to laugh or smile often and when she does its bright and cute. Once her trust is gained she will not betray you for anything even if you have a “Trent” episode, she also talks more and its hard to get her to shut up and offers great advice (from Yasmine) and is always there to help or heal (great at first aid from Issac). Natalia greatest skills come from her more than over IQ, her video game skills(logic), her archery(accuracy and stable hands, though they twitch after a certain amount of time if she isn’t holding anything), judo(hand-eye and fast reflexes), and fencing skill(same and judo), dancing skills(makes her graceful, unless “scared”) her resourcefulness(she never lets anything go to waste), she is always prepared, her creativity in her inventions, and her tactician skills. She fights more with words like Noah, than she does with fists, but when push comes to shove she will cross the line sometimes. Favorite things besides her hobbies-is fruit desserts, long-conversations about her interests, or wolves.

Her down sides are that she is a perfectionist, especially at organizing, being a pacifist, her fear is killing someone or seeing someone get killed, being a sort of idealist, thinking first and acting later(sometimes), being soft-spoken, sort of high-maintenance in a way that she needs to be ready for anything, she not very competitive(unless bribed with things above or someone promises to do something musical with her, dance with her, or play video games with her). When people are loud of argue it cause her to jump and/or stumble, her looks(sometimes she looks too fragile and people don’t trust her), and she cannot lie, though she can avoid the question or answer it in a partially true way. Dislike people who believe physical appearances are important(hands twitch even if something in hand if annoyed)

How do they act around people they don't know, parents, and teacher: she first appears to be soft-spoken, always pouting and having a blush on her face, shy, and quiet, and trusting to easily, and fragile, giving her the name Doll-Face. Natalia seems to trust easily but she actually is observing everyone and using logic and observation to see who is friend or foe. She seems like someone who is easy to push around and manipulate.

How do they act around friends: Natalia is still soft-spoken, she’s a pacifist and hates fighting unless its in defense and no one gets seriously injured, she starts to laugh or smile often and when she does its bright and cute. Once her trust is gained she will not betray you for anything even if you have a “Trent” episode. Also once you get her talking on a subject she loves, it is hard to get to to be quiet and stop jumping around.

How do they act around people they don't like: She fights more with words like Noah, than she does with fists, but when push comes to shove she will cross the line sometimes and will punch someone's lights out. Her hands twitch even if something is in her hand if annoyed by her enemies.

How do they act around crush: (I want to get paired up with Noah, Cody, or both 3)And Natalia tries to act like her usual self, smiles and giggles, but also uses her observational skills to see what type of things she can do/make so that they will like her, makes them gifts, invents something, etc. Her hands do not twitch around people she likes and she easily blushes for real around people she likes. When trying to ask them a question she stutters at the beginning and looks at the person's lips. She also is oblivious to everything around her, when the person(people) she likes is talking.

Do they swear:Nope, she likes it is too undignified

Fear and why: Blood, her dog got hit by a car in front of her and she was there when it slowly died and then she had nightmares about her family getting killed, ever since when ever she sees blood she thinks of that moment or her nightmares.

Want to be paired with some one:Yes

What kind of person:Since we arent doing characters, then I guess someone like Noah or Cody or both

Rest won't fit so I will PM you.
I used to be here chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
First Asheel has Neck length black hair

Name (you can put your middle if you want):Kendall Clarkson Din

Nickname(Optional you don't have to do this one if you don't want):

Age:15

Sterotype(Like the badboy, queen bee, gossiper, nerdstuff like that or just your own made up one):Popular

What do they look like(Hair style and color, eye color, hot, ugly, or in the middle):Long Black hair with a Blond streak,Shes Hot has Black eyes

Personality:Nice,bubbly and innocent but she can fight. Hates when Asheel gets over protective

Way the person acts around people they don't know:Try's to make them her friend

Way acts when with friends:Nice and sweet

Way acts with people they don't like:Keeps her cool but will get in a fight

Way they act around crushes:Nervous

Way they act when teachers are around:respectful

Way they act when parents are around:Nice

Do they swear:A little

Fear and why:BUGS She just hate's them

Likes:Shopping,talking and Usual girl stuff

Dislikes:Bugs and people she hates

Sexuality:straight

want to be paired with some one:Yes

What kind of person:somebody nice

What kind of Couple(friends, denial, romantic, up and down, secret):Secret but when it comes out up and down

How do they flirt(If they don't just put they don't):Don't flirt

How do they act being flirted by:someone she likes happy other than that Rejection

What kind of parents do they have:nice Dad who is CEO of something

History(What happened to them in thre past if nothing happened then put nothing):Mom murdered,Little sister to Asheel

Past relationips:1 but he was scared off by Asheel

what kind of people they would hang out with:Popular people but Hangs with brother Asheel
bad carma004 chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
Tash Lloyd

age - 17

female

the hot bipolar chick

long waist length platnim hair with a hint of blonde, shocking blue eyes tan skin

5 foot 3 119 pnds

curvy hourglass figure

likes- winning partying having fun meditating

dislikes bad karma sore looserd and whinners

known for - beating the hell out of 7 perverted football players who were annoying her

outfit-pink spagetti strap short

short dark blue jean shorts and boots

most of her cloths r tight and girlyish with a hint of rebellion

night wear- blue sweat pants and her light blue bra

she has mixed emotions around others one moment she is as kind as owen the as mean as eva as gentel as dj then as hot tempered as heather she is strong and emotional she can be a little accident prone but tries to be as nice as possible but dont get her annoyed or mad she sees red she is also very smart

she acts tha same around everyone

she is straight

her parents r fame seeking gold diggers

she has 1 sister identical in looks Brooke age 9 a genious child she is protective of her

(I ADDED A TAPE)audition tape - her father is holding the camra while an attractive teenage girl is jogging in a skimpy light pink sweatsuit just as some teenage boys surround her calling her hot and cute the teen beuty smiles suducively and walks to one of them as she grabs him the camra turns back to the father u have got to have her on your show she is amazing you can hear screams and punches in the background the father chuckels thats my girl the turns to the teenagers again the boys were scattered on the ground broken and bleeding and moaning the platnim haired girl cracked her nuckels and sneered the jogged away...end!
Taangy chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
Awwww... :( Thats sad that you have a disease...I hope you get better and have a happy life! Take all the time you need to start on the story
ImperioYou chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
I hope you get better (: And take as long as you need.
citgirl chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
Omg I hope you live a long happy life Even though you have cancer
Another Dead Red Lantern chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
That sucks, hope you get better.
PenguinWarrior88 chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
I'm so sorry, I truly hope you get better!
Kool Broadway Reader chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
I hope you get better!
El' Caliente chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
Tanya Geller

the social butterfly

age 16

short shoulder length strawbeery blonde hair that has a stupporn bang covering her left eye and emerald eyes

she is 5ft 4 inches 118 pnds curvy hourglass figure

personality - popular sweet always friendly knows everyone and tries to be everyones friends a sweetheart doesnt gossip but knows all the gossip tries not to hate people tries to find the good in everyone she is very protective of close friends

she acts that way to all and gets taken advantage of at times but always bounces back with a sweet smile

she is proud emmotional and respectful

cloths - all the latest fashons

regular cloths- light pink haltertop with matching skirt and sandels

formal- dark blue strappless cocktaildress

gym cloths - pink sports bra and white sweatpants

she hates to swear but if pushed to limit is known to swear

but afterwords gets emmotinal and apoligises

sexuality- straight

fear - being abandoned and outcassed

why - she is sensitive and needs friends is emmotional

likes - getting along fashon dancing friends almost everything

dislikes - fighting

paired up - yes a nice good looking guy

romantic or denial your pic

she shyly flirts is kinda dim about it

she will blush

parents - very close nit family, father is a minister mother is a child phycologist

littel brother Adam is 10 he is a book worm

and baby sister Robin is a bubbly 6 year old

past relationships - only 1 he broke her heart when she was 14, he cheated on her

she wants to be eveeryones friends doesnt hate tries to be as kind as possible

please please pic my character please!
El' Caliente chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Margrett Venkman (Maggie)

the prodagy child

she skipped a couple of grades because she is a genious and is now in high school she may be small but she is smart and tough

age - 9

she has long elbow length silky platnim hair pulled into a side swept ponytail and long bangs that covers her wide shimmering silver eyes she has alabaster skin but becareful she sunburns easily and aristacat features she is 4 foot 6 87pnds she is cute and innocent looking but dont be fooled

personality - loud smart sassy curious clumsy enthusiastic

acts around people - she acts spunky and all innocent with alittle myschivous and mysterius most of the time u cant tell wat she is saying she is soo smart

acts with friens - bossy childish kind protective enthusiastic

acts around people she doesnt like- sassy loud curious glares at them

she is too young for a relationship but has been known to flirt

acts to teachers- innocent teachers pet

around parents- perfect mature and intelligent yet innocent

clothe - pink combo boots and pink tangtop light blue jean shorts

formal sloths- mid thigh fraily silk majenta dress with pink low heals

gym cloths - pink teeshirt and pink sweatshorts and tennis shoes

she does not swear her parents told her its a sin to swear she speaks 10 different languages though and might swear in a differnt language

her fear - drowning because she isnt a good swimmer and nearly drowned when she was 4 and horror stories/movies

and never forgot

likes- getting her way talking to friends learning reading solving puzzels candy

dislikes - party poopers rules and sweat

sexuality - straight might have crushes on hot guys but wont pursue anything because she is too young

she is known to flirt but thats all in a cute way though

she will get deffensive at times she has a lot of pride for a little girl

parents- her daddy is a big time lawyer and her mommy is a model living in itily

they arent divorced

history- she is the pride of her parents lives

no past relationships

she will hang out with who she can anyone she deams cool but u can decide who

please please pic my character please!
babydon'tletmefall chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
THAT'S TERRIBLE! :( I know this isn't going to help... BUT I'M SO SORRY! :( :( :(

If you don't want to work on this story, that's ok. :P I understand and everyone else SHOULD too.
CC the Bug chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
OMG! Please get better, I don't like people dieing!
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