| Reviews for The Untold Story |
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   valash122 chapter 6 . 5/10 my main issue with your story is the whole power scaling here once you have naruto stomping orochimaru then here he is getting ass kicked by gaara? and having gaara saying he's stronger? dude naruto LITERALLY WHOOPED HIS ASS IN THE BEGINNING of your story also your making naruto fight more with instincts then actual strategy like does sealing exist in your story? cause if he knew his mother and knew he was the prince of whirlpool HE WOULD KNOW THAT SEALING IS WHAT MADE THEM KNOWN! so if you ever come back to the story if ever you need to rewrite or look up naruto's family techniques and what they where known for and the branch out. cause naruto could of already defeated minato with the use of sealing but you didnt use it or just wanted to use minato as more fight/ambush character |
| Fanfiction Angel chapter 17 . 5/9 you are a disappointment to all fanfic writers. not only did you abandon a good start but you didn't warn your viewers that you were abandoning the story |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2019 In one sentence you say he doesnt want to interact with konoha, then in the same chapter have him mess with them? Wtf |
| Monster King chapter 17 . 11/8/2018 Great job |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2018 absolutely fucking reatarted |
| omegaderose chapter 13 . 5/7/2018 shikamaru not shikimaru you noob |
| omegaderose chapter 9 . 5/7/2018 KARIN AND SHISUI LEARN THE NAMES DAMMIT AND HIS NAME IS KAKUZO |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 Welcome to my mine, We are mining diamonds |
| WinterForSummer chapter 5 . 11/25/2017 New cloaks and hats is what they are going to spend a ton of money on? How about hideouts, spys, or equipment? |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/10/2017 Thanks for writing |
| jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 17 . 6/2/2017 What a stupid.. this is fiction.. all couples, all relationships are OK because this is fiction! You are a jerk... |
| jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 16 . 6/2/2017 Why you abandon this story? You are so bad.. |
| jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 15 . 6/2/2017 New shinobi era.. new war and without Naruto and temari, without Gaara and Shikmaru? I think its impossible for the alliance to win.. |
| jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 14 . 6/2/2017 Oh i think i can understand now.. you killed Gaara just for add Temari to akatsuki and she can be happy with Naruto.. good choice.. absolutely good idea.. |
| jackiepriinzee.perezz chapter 13 . 6/2/2017 The fight scenes are a little large don't you think? I get tired reading all.. Aww poor Shikaku, his only son, so young and smart.. nos is gone.. why? I think Naruto deserve to die, i want him to be happy with Temari but.. maybe that never happen.. |
