Geh-!? I read the whole last chappie and didn't even realize it was you just talking, and I was SO anticipating some action...darn. Oh well...

OMG that was SO hott! I've been looking for a really good AllenxLink pairing XP Great job. You write really well. I'm also loving the other chapters 3

This is so cute! Please don't change Kanda's character, I think he's fine the way he is. Can't wait to see what happens next ; )

Hey there! As I mentioned in my message this story is love 3 because it really is cute how ignorant Kanda is throughout this entire time.

And I love the Allen/Link in here even with Allen as the seme, you have enlightened my eyes XD

Is this the story ehere you want to fix because Kanda is getting too ooc? Because I'm actually okay with it because it's really cute and I can't help but giggle.

Please continue this story, it seems like only one more chapter is needed for the conclusion, it can go longer, but it would be a great place to finish up with one more chapter.

So far, this is a very cute story! I've been thinking about this scenario for a while too, and I'm glad to have finally found a story about it! And virgin Link is adorable! XD

I can see Allen being the seme with Link as his uke, Allen seems more dominant while Link is kinda like a wife (cooking, cleaning, etc...) lol!

Great job and great story!

"Sensible" should be "sensitive", I'm not sure if you realized this recurring typo or not, it happens a lot with word processors.

Also you have "warped" and "warp" instead of "wrapped" and "wrap" again, a typical processor typo...

I just thought that you might want to know about those. The rest of the story is fine, those are the only misused words so don't worry too much about it.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! You did say that you weren't going to abandon this fic... right?

Finish it and Lavi will give you bunny-shaped cookies (and Kanda-shaped ones too!).

Oh my goodness! I would have never thought that this was a LavixKanda fix but I'm so glad I decided to read it because I think it's do adorable and the plots great! I hope you update! :D

wow loxe the stoey

update

update

update!

First lol nice but then omg can you say hot but awesome job and write more please

over all review chapters 1-12. amazing story i really hope you continue this. looking forword to it. ~Kori-no-hime

One question, how did Lavi know that the tea was spiked? And a comment, I suggest looking at the end again because there are a few grammatical errors I noticed :)

Also, I can't remember if you mentioned this or not, but Kanda is a OOC in this fic. Just wondering if you are aware and if you planned it that way. If you did, you might want to add that at the beginning of the fic so people will know.

O_O I have to say I was not expecting that! Holy fuck! I have been behind in reading updates and this was amazing! I never would have put those two together but, wow. And I never would have expected Link to end up as the Uke especially after Allen's line about keeping that 'package' a secret from him.

I did notice a few times in the story that a few words were misspelled. The one I can clearly remember is the word "wrap" or any of its derivatives. It either ended up being 'warp' or warped.' So you might just want to do another edit and fix them :)

O.O kanda got drugged...wow...i cant wait till the next chapter! XDD

i loved it a lot and i hope you update soooooooooon

Oh wow, Lavi's a sneaky one. Haha This is a funny fic. I don't really like LinkXAllen, but I do love LaviXKanda. Haha, so cute! Kanda trying to hide the fact that it was Lavi. Still, Kanda would be sorta OOC if he ever did that, right? I loved the tickleing chapters and the results haha! Awesome fic!

-Saph