Reviews for Dark Hearts
batwingsnana951 chapter 7 . 8/13/2015
This story is amazing! I'm left with millions of questions and it keeps me hanging on each word. I anticipate the next chapter!
JoyceDare chapter 7 . 5/17/2015
Hope you get back to this someday.
Darcie11 chapter 7 . 10/20/2014
I hope you continue this sometime soon. It is really good, there's so much action and suspense. I can't wait to see what happens next!

-LK
Update please chapter 7 . 9/4/2014
This story is beautiful. I love it so much! It left off on quite a cliffhanger, huh? I'm so excited to see what happens next, so I hope you have a chance to update!

:) Thanks!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/28/2014
Wow...This story is truly amazing! I really love the idea of a run-down Hyrule, and the whole dark feeling of this story. It's super, super awesome! Please update soon!
:)
Total Romance Fan chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
Poor Zelda, and Link almost found her out. I'm glad she finally delivered those letters though, maybe than Uli will relies that 'Marin' had come to try and deliver them. Good luck with the rest! I can't believe that you chased her with wolves! Please update soon!
Total Romance Fan chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
I wish she'd tell Link who she really is! If she doesn't its going to blow up in her face! Plus I would have been relieved or told the truth when she heard that Uli was still alive, I mean she still has the letters she was supposed to give to them! Lying is not going to help her at all, I hope everything goes well... What season is it, if its not Spring? If I was Zelda I would have been sad, and maybe left in the middle of the night.. MAYBE... I just feel bad for Zelda and Link.. :(
Guest chapter 7 . 12/31/2013
I absolutely ADORE this story! I hope you keep writing more of it! I know, it's been a long time since you've updated, and this review is kind of late...but please continue with this story!
deleted123123 chapter 7 . 8/26/2013
I almost cried when I read the confession (When Zelda was nurturing Link)...

Also, I never thought Link could lose temper so easily. Well, in his situation I wouldn't be better...

Whyyyyy? Why did you leave, Zelda? Why didn't you stay and destroy the wedding?

I really liked this chapter and this story is definitely among my top of the top favourites, maybe even the most favourite! I would like to express how much I adore this story but unfortunately I'm short on time. Update soon! :)

Puffy

P.S. Sorry for my horrid English.
deleted123123 chapter 6 . 8/26/2013
You should get rid of Ilia... really. Throw her to the monsters or something... I hate her. Always have, always will.

"Well, Link's not really an open person and I know that… But, I feel like he's always giving an excuse to not marry me." At Zelda's startled look, Ilia continued, "Originally, we were supposed to be married about two weeks ago, but Link keeps making excuses to put it off. And he's not romantic in the slightest towards me. I mean, sure he's affectionate, but it feels like he's keeping a boundary between us."

Me: YESSS! He is STILL conflicted with his feelings towards Zelda! (Can you even say it like that? Sorry for my sucky English _') Man I'm glad Sheik is fine... Ganondorf can throw himself into a pit and I STILL wouldn't care ...Just one more chappie!
deleted123123 chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
Aww, no making out for them? Okay... *Reads on*

"Oh… Sorry. I haven't properly introduced myself." Ilia said, smiling. "I'm Ilia. Link's my fiancé."

Me: *dramatic* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *cries and sobs hysterically* Cancel it! CANCEL ITT!

Seriously I love this story more and more...

"Oh, really? How do you figure that?" Link said, his voice monotone though Fado could hear the pain.
"Because, on the day she left, you were going to ask her to marry you."

What? WHAT? WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?
If you only knew, Link...

A veeery nice chapter. But Zelda should totally crash Ilia and Link's wedding or cancel it or somethin'... And reveal herself to Link... and get married to him... *keeps dreaming*
deleted123123 chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
FINALLY LINKIE'S BACK INTO ZELDA'S LIFE! Next you should give them a make-out session... seriously, they are meant to be. I just love this idea of War-torn Hyrule... and I'm gonna keep reading.
Rael II chapter 7 . 8/25/2013
This is so good, almost like it was written by a professional author. I'm loving the story and still cannot wait for the next chapter!
WHY SO SERIOUS chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
I need MOOOOOOOOOAR... BTW this was an AWESOME chapter. I REALLY wish that Link would figure who she is sooner. (You should've seen my reaction when I found out you updated ... I was jumping around the room like a rabbit and screaming at the top of my lungs...)... and QUESTION how long is this fic going to be?
desertstorm chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
aww! Link yelled at the kids? Why'd he do that? With the way Zelda was talking about him, he seemed so nice. What happened? Why you stop with wolves?! That's not answers!
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