Nnnnnooooo you can't end it like that i need to know what happens next.. Lol keep it the good work and hole it gets updated soon

Great story.

Though, you should have a chapter or omake where Naruto, Ryu, and Sasuke get chased by rabid fangirls.

please update asap

Love it wish there was more

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Actually Hashirama created the scroll of seals, though Naruto is an Uzumaki which by the way are cousins to the Senju so by right here could own it.

How does someone that's SUPPOSEDLY running a shipping EMPIRE on an ISLAND not leave any traces of where he is?.. Here is a great idea, look for the gaudiest, biggest mansion that has lots of people constantly going in or out, or that has guards... AND KICK IT'S WALLS DOWN... Because geniuses, that's probably where he is! It's NOT that tough! (there aren't too many places to look)

I always thought it FUNNY that there are 7 swords' men of the mist? They are ALL water users and they all use swords... (um, can you say walking LIGHTNING RODS?!) against kumo, the only way they could win is all the kumo nin were too busy holding their sides from LAUGHING.

Every notice that kakashi seems to have taken a "stupidity pill" before his fight with zabuzza? What kind of former anbu-captain takes on a water user, ON TOP OF A LAKE? Did he not NOTICE that the ground was suddenly WATER?.. Also most of kakashi's attacks are LIGHTNING based... Zabuzza is wielding a large sword.. aka.. a HUGE PIECE OF METAL, ON WATER! This should have been a JOKE fight.

Actually the veins and the liver are NOT "instant" death, they take anywhere from a few seconds to a few minutes.. MOST veins give you a FEW minutes even the jugular... It's ARTERIES that will bleed you out faster... They "squirt" every time the heart BEATS... (BUT that being said, yeah ALL those are "kill shots", the person IS going to die, no "maybe", "buts", or "magic" cures)...and even the HEAD will continue to "see" and "think" for up to 6 milla-seconds after severed from the body. FOR "instant" death, you have to interrupt the nerve impulses between the synapses and responding areas.. So "brain stem"?.. Yeah that's pretty much "insta-kill", severed spinal cord? Yup that too(depending on how high up the body), same with beheading (those 8 seconds don't REALLY matter if the body can't send any signals anywhere). So insta-death, tearing someone in half, ALSO insta-death, sends the body into "trauma-shock", so it doesn't matter if you CAN move something in the BRIEF moments your alive, the body has NO IDEA how to handle the feedback from all the other nerves. (same thing happens if you set fire to someone with REALLY high-octane fuel, the body can't cope with that much damage at once and shuts down) It's like overloading a system's ram until it CRASHES.

So THAT'S IT? A few jutsu, a little money, and those guys just get off the hook? OH I WOULD NOT allow that! Blood cries out for BLOOD! The deaths would be the only part that was NON-NEGOTIABLE! A lot of the village OR ALL the village, PICK ONE!

Also I'm a LITTLE confused, how did sarutobi think he could HIDE all this? What happened when the boy GREW UP? What happens when he becomes a ninja and LEAVES the village (and country) on missions? What happens when the people he's lied too need to be a part of the kid's training? See? I don't exactly see the thought behind this because the plan has too many holes in it! It's like orochi's plans with sasuke, exactly what does he plan to do in the enevitable years? Then he LOSES the eyes he so DESPERATELY wants, and since sasuke is the last one he can can claim, then there ARE NO MORE (even if he 'sired' a couple kids, orochimaru would have to wait YEARS before they were old enough to be any use to him), SEE? Both Orochimaru and the third(in this story)'s plans MAKE NO SENSE, because there is an expiration date on BOTH of them, and the blow back, makes them NOT WORTH the trouble! ) Although not really that bad for the third, I mean some cash and some jutsu, so no big deal. (see? You didn't make them PAY).. Also haven't you ever wondered, "why doesn't orochimaru just have some eyes transplanted in?".. I mean he could steal two VERY EASILY from danzo while he was helping him with the arm. (what's danzo gonna do? He can't TELL anyone that orochimaru suckered him) Then even though he couldn't use naruto as a vessel, he still could have got naruto OFF of "guard duty" very easily and got to sasuke with STUPID ease (if he still wanted him).

They made all these "plans" LAST chapter, which you said was TWO YEARS ago, it's been TWO YEARS and they STILL haven't DONE anything? WHY?

that was good keep the chapters coming

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

la pregunta mia es donde carajo se ametido el escritor tengo años esperando a que actualice esta historia