It's been a thousand years since I first read this, and this piece of fiction still ranks as one of my favorites. I come back to it all the time.

I'm having a grand time reading your old stories. You have a fascinating writing style that is unmatched. I truly enjoy the time I get to spend in the scenarios you create.

Fantastic!

Whoa!

Wow! That's all I can really say is wow! It took a few minutes for me to understand the style of who was speaking, thoughts, etc, but that was creepy and awesome all at the same time!

Creepy but super :). I love your writing. Clever Gibbs, bluffing the bad guy to get the answers he needed. You write a very good psycho by the way lol.

I loved every bit of it!

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Some species of spiders should be crushed under heel as eggs.

This seems really, really interesting and cool, but I might like it better if you gave me a simple, little explanation as to what happened. It might be helpfull, you know, with the whole understanding processes of our brains, you see.

Wow. This is absolutely amazing. I love the style of the writing and how it is from the killer's point of view! Wonderful work.

Wow...That was great! I love the way the story was told, from the point of view of the 'spider.' Pretty damn creepy. I'd love to know just how Tim found him, wow. Awesome story!

Wow. This is a great story! I love it!

That was *so* good. Your monster makes Dexter look warm and fuzzy.

I loved how the "spider" got trapped by Gibbs and McGee. Classic.

wow! powerful. You really created a monster. Thank you!

Wow, just WOW. Completly blew my mind. The format was amazing and the suspense of the story was awesome. WOW.