Reviews for The Weight of the Heart
Issexwithyourcloneincest chapter 1 . 3/24
Naruto's a fucking GOD but he's allowing Itachi to treat him like a prized slave? His pride shouldn't allow that. He should have maimed both sasuke and Itachi for even thinking of taking him. I honestly expected to see a part where Naruto goes like 'you think too much of yourself mortal. I am not someone to approach simply out of lust. You shouldn't even have tried acting on it. Greater men have died for less' and then he flexes his godly power and terrifies the shit out of him, but no. It's him being a bitch. He should have just let Itachi die but only then does he decide to flex and bring him back to life like an overpowered bitch
michaellwestwood chapter 1 . 7/25/2019
i should have not this was gay
suria-bear chapter 14 . 12/10/2018
I'm really speechless. This is good. I love what you did with this story and it was perfect. keep up the good work.
Lu Bright chapter 13 . 12/3/2018
Omg this story is so amazing
Lu Bright chapter 7 . 12/3/2018
Dude- I would be PO that Itachi isn’t respecting me and treating me like a dog. He should be punished- by Anubis or Naruto himself!
Guest chapter 14 . 8/14/2018
I was really hoping that this story would entertain me more than the other that I have already read, but sadly it didn't reach even half of my expectation. The only redeeming quality of this story is its plot and the fandom you use.
Leoboy92 chapter 14 . 7/27/2018
Im in utter love with this story. The ending was perfect. I almost wish there was more of a connection between Naruto and Itachi but other than that it was so much fun to read
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 14 . 1/28/2018
That was lovely.
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 2 . 1/27/2018
Naruto is a GOD but why does he seem so weak? I get not wanting to use his powers against humans but he can at least maim them so they can't harm him in any way.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/26/2017
This story was something new...no like other storys that was something refreshing...i cant believe how much I love this... They have eternaty love... So amaizing
Guest chapter 14 . 7/26/2017
Just...amaizing...no other words...
LBH-don't give up chapter 14 . 3/6/2017
Great story! I couldn't stop reading it untill i have reached the end.
Fortune's Smile chapter 14 . 1/26/2017
Whoa... Great story. (Though I had a hunch Itachi would die at the end, but I thought it would be to save Naruto's life. What a plot twist!)
I find you chose a very unique setting! You depict Ancient Egypt very well.
Thank you SO much for writing this story. I am a huge fan of your Naruto fictions; please keep on writing! (:
HelleBelle chapter 14 . 1/15/2017
I'm proud of Naruto and the boys even though it started off rock at first.
HelleBelle chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
Sasuke I think this karama from all the other bs you've done over the years
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