Dude even though that story was small and a one shot, that story was better than most of the long ones on this site. If your thinking of creating a longer story around this one I would read it any day.

That was not a very good lemon, but a really good love making scene.

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2 things, First: damn Kurenai is thirsty . , second: did no man in 4 years do what Naruto did? you'd think the child would have plenty of father figures xd

J'aime beaucoup c'est totalement bien écrit .

J'adore ce couple j'adore tous les couples avec Naruto .
Naruto est parmi les mecs qui pour moi à cause de son passé ferait le père idéal c'est pour cela que je ne comprends pas que son comportement dans boruto enfin c'est à cause de l'écrivain.
Sasuke est pour moi gay même si il se marie avec Sakura et à sarada .
Shino est trop calme.
Kiba trop bruyant.
Chouji n'est pas encore adapté.
Shikamaru est le deuxième après Naruto.

not sarcastic

not the greatest I've read. kinda bland. nice job

A really nice oneshot

i think i'm gonna hang onto this for repeat reading. hits all he right parts with enough flavor in each point to satisfy for what it is. good job.

A really sweet story, well done :)

Best one shot fanfic i have ever read keep up am following you

All I can say is "Holy Shit! That was awesome" loved the whole thing and I think that you could easily make a novel length fic from the premise of this it has great potential

Great story, as for the lemon I actually really liked how you made the scene believable. Overall loved the FLUFF.

It's a great story

Nice story i wish the was chapter or part2 nice one man/gal