Quite brilliant.

This is super good. I hope you get the writing but again or a must visit so this is one day finished. I really like strong Sookie stories. This has a great plot, it's imaginative. Really just a great piece of work. So, I would love to read more of this if you are still interested in writing FF that is.

I just discovered this. It’s a shame it might not be finished.

Eric has met his match. This is a fun story.

Absolutely loved this story and the intellectual know how of Sookie. I hate her when she is a sook and the a typical dumb blonde. Loving the different side of Eric too. Hoping you will find time to finish this story one day. Thank you for the laughs and intrigue so far.

Advantage Sookie: successful termination of previous agreement due to Eric's physical abuse; successful new agreement; Niall; wings; escape. I love how things have improved! I look forward to Real Life giving you a chance to come back to this story. It's so unique!

I'm heartened because "his stomach twisted tighter than before and his chest ached" because of the burns to Sookie's wrists. He'd better get used to having feelings. And she scores again!

Eric was smart to figure out she can't leave once negotiations have opened until negotiations are concluded. OMG he punched her again! And rechained her! Douche

Eep, she doesn't know about scenting. I'm glad the electrical hand-shake agreement they made the previous night prevented him from giving her blood!

Unexpected citrus; I kinda like the idea of a non-Bill-or-Quinn romantic rival. It's so unfair that everyone desires Eric and he doesn't have to worry about any other guy being hotter or more desirable than him!

That was a fun and funny chapter. I like that Eric is feeling somewhat protective of her now. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hahaha Bill! He's going to have some VERY bad news for the queen.

I totally hope he does get to share her PMS symptoms! I love how clever Sookie is, and I hope Eric comes to value her for herself instead of a bloodbag asset

You know I love Eric, but he's acting no better than Bill by forcing a bond on Sookie. I'm glad to see she can protect herself somewhat, and Eric certainly deserves everything she dishes out! I want more!

No! I hate that he's thinking he'll "lock her in his dayroom with him and keep her next to him at all times, handy for him to fuck her and feed off her whenever the urge struck him until he tired of her". What a scumbag!

From "his for the night" to his first pet, he thinks. Ha! I'm glad she backed Bill down with a glare, but it seems like Eric's attentions are going to be insulting.