Um, if the fox is fighting the town, it sounds like he's a good guy.

Oh no! I hope you havent forgotten about this sorry or abandoned it either! It's soo good! I want to know why Tonks confessed and what is going on on the island. Please update!

Please please PLEASE oh god please what happened? Don't leave it there!

Thanks for the update! I loved it! Please update soon!

Ahhhhh that was stupid. Incredibly stupid. AHHH WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? You have me on the edge of my seat... can't wait to see how this winds up!

Audrey :D

As stupid as that might have been for Tonks to do, it was alas a VERY Tonksish thing to do haha. And being that close to being an Auror, she must have thought it best, as well as with how close he was to figuring out anyway... well, let's just hope he doesn't freak out XD

This story is so interesting! I love the way you write, can't wait for more!

I was so pleased to see you had updates this - I was starting to wonder what had happened to it! :D

Excellent chapter, as always. Really loved the exchange between Tonks & Murron and the section about her mother and Narcissa, it gives a little bit more depth to Tonk's character with the memories. Can't wait to read the next chapter - the tension's really starting to build!

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Anyways, lovely to hear from you and your stories again! Still excited to see your updates :) And I like the fact that Tonks is slowly getting the gist of things.

Best,

Audrey :3

I love your idea - who knew that Muggle detective stories could be made better by adding Tonks? Not me, but I'm happy to be proven wrong. The plot is delightfully creepy, and the story itself is well written. I'm looking forward to the resolution!

Ack, I'm so sorry it's taken so long to review - exams have been eating up all my spare time.

The last two chapters have been fantastic - it's getting far darker and more intriguing- lovely.

I'm really liking the relationship between Tonks and Brodie - he's really starting to grow on me now - can't wait to see how that winds up. And Murron - such a bitch, your characters are fab- I really felt like smacking her when she was talking to Tonks in her room.

Very intrigued now as to why Tonks can't get hold of Kingsley - really reinforces the idea that she's all alone- and makes the whole situation more sinister.

Fantastic as always, can't wait for an update! :D

*bounces up and down*

Good chapter! So they're beginning to uncover bits at a time... I like the chapter name You have such creative ideas, hehe.

Best,

Audrey

Oo, things are starting to pick up. All the previous chapters have been subtly creepy (aside from the prologue of course), but now it's starting to get downright malevolent. I like it, I like it!

Knew it!

So we'll get somehow from here to the prologue, containing a wandless Tonks and a captured Brodie? This'll be good :)

Well, I'll be looking forwards to the next chapter.

Oh dear, I am a terrible little reviewer aren't I? I've been up to my ears with work for sixth form & haven't had much spare time - So sorry!. Anyway, lovely as always - The relationship between Tonks and Brodie seems to be deepening, which can only be interesting, and this new character of Rook seems very intriguing - can't wait to see how that pans out. :D