Reviews for Mistake
LB Cat chapter 7 . 7/12
It's a good story. I wonder what happen next. Thanks for a good read. Take care.
coffeeeeee122 chapter 6 . 5/17
I really like this chapter and how you handled the resolution for that drunk night. It progressed the plot and showed a bit of growth in both of them, was a wonderful blend of sweet and heartbreaking, and overall well-written. Thanks for sharing your story!
coffeeeeee122 chapter 3 . 5/17
hopefully a relatively recent edit of this chap means it'll be updated soon? hehehe one can hope. enjoying the story and your writing so far!
Bluewarrior3 chapter 7 . 1/29
Poor hinata. We all know she's helping naruto because she still has feelings for him. You dont do that for just anyone. But shes suffering to and thats what makes this story sad. And sakura is a bitch. 3 years isnt around the corner you know! Very good story tho.
Theblueswordsman chapter 3 . 12/13/2019
I love the concept, but it's like you're trying not to finish a thought...
Theblueswordsman chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
super confused about everything in this chapter. a lot of jumping around without finishing thoughts...
Kurama0430 chapter 7 . 8/9/2019
please update!
Angi sleeps chapter 7 . 8/3/2019
Why haven’t I found this sooner? Thank you for the this story! It has potential! I hope you’ll update soon!
orange.leaf.hokage chapter 1 . 3/3/2019
This story is a gem!
You wrote wonderfully! Please update
marlen19mana chapter 7 . 10/3/2018
Please please keep updating ! This story is amazing !
RavenShadow chapter 7 . 8/13/2018
This both hopeful and heartbreaking, please update soon.
Key chapter 7 . 8/13/2018
This fanfiction is pure gold so far. I'm happy I decided to read it. Your writing is just incredible - perfect, even. And I never use this word to describe one's writing. Please continue your work regardless of the flames in the reviews. I might create myself an accoynt just to 'follow' and 'favorite' this - if that's even possible lol, I don't know how FF actually works. I wish there were more french Naruto writers that would put out stories as great but eh. I guess all my english class had a purpose. I'm able to read, comprehend and enjoy great english stories like yours ! ANYWAYS. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
hinatamyqueen chapter 7 . 8/12/2018
Nice chapter
Guest chapter 7 . 8/11/2018
This storyyyyy is so gooooood. Hinata feels so in character all the time. Just the right amounts of seriousness and kindness. You have her say exactly what needs to be said and her viewpoint on Naruto feels so real! I can’t wait for the next update!
llazo4108824 chapter 6 . 7/22/2018
This is a very cool fanfic and could you make more chapters soon please I love to see what happens next to Naruto and Hinata.
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