Reviews for Distorted Reality
1221bookworm chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
Very well written piece. Great way to show how they are always taking care of each other.
Just me and myself chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
That was sooo sweet!
Fanmlz chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Excellent story. Eliot tucking Parker in was adorable. Agreed seeing how the rest of the job goes would be great.
Maimat B chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Great little story, and it would be cool to see a story about how the rest of that job goes too! Great writing!
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
that was great loved it
darkloves chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
so sweet... I enjoyed reading this, thank you. :)
vampout chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
this was beyond cute! great job!
Touch of the Wind chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Lovely
Fleur27 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I really liked this - it was true to the characters and was very enjoyable to read. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
kelsey-joy chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I tend to be a bad reader and don't usually comment on stories but it just seems wrong that there isn't more of a response to this. I really like how Parker doesn't really explain what happened and Eliot doesn't really push her to say much beyond what he needs to understand the situation. The responses seem in character especially Eliot's initial annoyance and then his concern because as much as Parker drives him crazy he wouldn't want her to be scared or hurt.
little miss michelle chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
really cute story! I love eliot and parker!