Reviews for Forward Unto Atlantis
ShadowKiller24 chapter 1 . 6/30
Wonderful story! Hope all is well with you!
Gregary Fritsch chapter 6 . 3/20
i hope you are staying safe out there.
santosrivera chapter 6 . 12/9/2019
Great excellent follow it soon please this super wonderful
santosrivera chapter 5 . 12/9/2019
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santosrivera chapter 3 . 12/9/2019
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santosrivera chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
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santosrivera chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
Great excellent follow it soon please this super wonderful
BrentNewland chapter 5 . 7/30/2019
This is so fucking stupid. The UNSC just starts attacking everyone left and right? Fucking bullshit. I'm pretty sure Weir would have told them to fuck off after that. You make the expedition seem like pushovers.
BrentNewland chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
As far as your section about bullets not firing in space:

"And if you think that fire can't burn in the oxygen-free vacuum of space, you're absolutely right. However, modern ammunition comes with its own oxidiser chemical that can trigger the explosion of gunpowder"

That being said, vacuum will make metal incredibly brittle and freeze any lubrication, so it's possible firing a gun might cause it to damage itself.
Hikari Nova chapter 6 . 3/27/2019
it's been 6 going on 7 years please update this
santosrivera chapter 1 . 12/31/2018
Follow him soon please is super great great
hey chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
Your formatting need a some work. I won't pretend I'm a professional but I don't think you're ever supposed to have "dialogue 1" "dialogue 2" without a bridge or line break.
huongdaoroma chapter 6 . 9/2/2018
It's been six years since the last update. I hope everything is going well for you and that you're still kicking.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/25/2018
Deadalus can take a solar flare. That Mac round wouldn’t dent the shields.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2018
Cutter used his slip space drive as a bomb, and the ship has slow engines. No way they could do an intercept on the dead Ali’s with sunlight capable of 99% speed of light.
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