Reviews for One Small Step |
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Owyheewinds chapter 6 . 8/31/2019 Great work! |
mckydstarlight chapter 6 . 7/6/2017 That made me happy. I love them so much. |
mckydstarlight chapter 5 . 7/6/2017 *has more feelings |
mckydstarlight chapter 4 . 7/6/2017 Ow ow ow ow ow. |
mckydstarlight chapter 3 . 7/6/2017 Jim Kirk. Bless him. |
bee.zippy chapter 6 . 5/3/2017 Quite enjoyable! |
atymer chapter 6 . 4/22/2017 *snort* *grin* |
atymer chapter 4 . 4/22/2017 I think a lot of disaster workers here these sounds throughout their lives. The ones they could not save. It is a reminder that life is precious. |
atymer chapter 3 . 4/22/2017 So cute. |
Dalamanza chapter 6 . 1/9/2017 I actually love your stories |
cytpotter chapter 6 . 9/29/2016 :D Yup enjoyed this very much! Love those 5 and ones! Great Job! Thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2015 Thanks for the good word pictures. I can just see Jim and Spock tied to that tree! I really enjoy your sense of humor - so great to have stories that bring a laugh or a smile. Glad you made another Trek fan. Hope "Protector" keeps writing Trek stories. Tell her I said "Welcome aboard". |
MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 2 . 10/9/2014 This is amazing. The only thing I would be careful about in the future is your use of pronouns: When you say 'he' it's not always clear who you're talking about. But this is wonderful. You really portrayed the characters so well that I almost expect to find this scene on Netflix somewhere. Keep writing! |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/16/2014 It's not Spocks fault that the wind blew his hat off :( |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2014 Love it so much! Please write more! |