Reviews for Darkest Before The Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good start. Wondering how this will turn into BxE storplay and how does this movie come into play? All questions will be answered in due time I gather. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, thanks so much! I'm special. LOL *sigh* I want my Jacob in real life too! Why, oh why? Can I get a lemon next time, too? LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Bella! Way to bring it home! I love how you have put some links in there to help us know where to go to help make a difference. Great story! Keep up the good work. Thanks for the shout out too! Love you sis! kacull. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey H2B! I'm so very proud of you for this story! You are a very talented writer and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Keep the chapters coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering how you were going to work the Blacks into the mix! Very nicely done! I loved this chap esp that hot Griselle! Cant wait for more xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow girl that chap was hot! :) I love Bella's internal dialogue shes hilarious! Cant wait for more..oh wait you just updated HOOOORAY off I go chap 3 :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...im guessing Bella ends up going to an audition soon? this is kind of taking too long, but good none the less |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, stephen is an arse. Go Bella for getting her rocks off on the men she wants and aims for! I cant wait to meet Edward and see Business Bella turn into mush! hahaha! Great writing! Your descriptions take me there totally! kacull xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() ALice is great in this story! Sounds like Bella had a wild ride, and its great she isnt ashamed of it! Damn those designer bags for gettin' a girl in trouble in more ways than one! Keep up the great work. The story is great! kacull. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhhh, just your prologue gave me shivers... Im going to keep reading! You have a brilliant play on words. I could see it all. Keep up the good work! Kacull. xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait to read more! :) xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it so far! Can't wait for an update! Can you do me a favor and check out my profile? I'm participating in Fictionista Witfit Prompts, and all my other stories are on hiatus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW, Bella's kinda...yah...you know. It will be interesting to see what you do with this bad girl. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start! I'm so proud of you...you go girl. Now...When will you update? I need to know what's happening next. hahahaha :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() H2B! Im so proud of you! You are off to a great start! Congrats girl on getting this up and rolling! Im lovin it so far! I cant wait to see what you have in that crazy mind of yours lol Keep writing! xox |