Wait...you're kidding. No way in hell is this your first fanfic! This is fucking good! I loved your methaphors (?) (six ways from Sunday being my favorite, I'm going to remember that one) Dante and Nero were in great character. Loved the ending, oh Dante...Great job!

OMFG! i loved your story, you combined fluff and smut all in one and it was amazing. you are a wonderful and very talented author. the way you made the words string together and flow made this fic enjoyable to read. thank you for writing it :)

I really enjoyed this story! :) It was incredibly sweet. And I like how you used the Papa Roach song. It really fit the story. The only advice I give is to keep writing. :) Am really glad that I found this story.

so sweet! and hot!

brilliant ]

I loved it! : ] I think you should write a follow up when Nero does come back! Id love to read it!

Sequel.. Sequel.. Sequel.. Sequel!

Please... ]

LOVE IT! Hope you'll write more soon...

Take care and good luck!

ohoho! smut and bitter/sweet angts, this is love XD

however, grammar faults appear..very slightly though! but hey, first story right? well it's a pretty good start in my opinion! please do continue writing! i'll look forward to them -