Reviews for The One of Us |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nawww x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was... unexpected. I don't think anyone would have thought it would end that way. Killer ending, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh so sad! But I liked it quite a lot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God. I am crying now. Do not do this D: That was amazing and so damn sad... -faved- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did I read this after pulling an all-nighter? I'm pretty sure it's because I'm a masochist, cuz now I'm a mess. Wonderful story. Off to read your other RENT works now. Btw, if you're interested, Mini Moments of Mark and Roger has a sequel ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so beautiful and deep. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that's so sad. I wish you could see me right now; I've got tears streaming down my face, and about a minute ago I was whispering "No, no, no! Not Marky! He can't be dead! Marky!" It's a great story. I love how well you portrayed Mark and Roger's friendship and love for each other in a non-romantic way. So when that unnamed woman walked by in the end, I was imagining Gwen Stewart in that part. I love how you twisted Mark's words around so they're gut-wrenching and like throwing his words back in his face. I also love how you didn't make it obvious at the beginning that Roger was talking to Mark's grave; it kept me guessing a little (even though I was pretty sure I knew where it was going). It's very well-written. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() -tear- OMRD. Marky. No. :'O This was uber-sad. But wonderful job. -faved.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was incredibly sad, but a very smart way to implant tiny foreshadowing hints that don't really hit you until the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was unexpected, but when I reread it I felt that it was so obvious, I should have known... of course I didn't, but then you said "the cemetery" and I'm like "Oh no!" and I read it again, "Oh, duh. That makes sense." It made me sad, which was good. I pictured Mark in a hospital or something, or sulking somewhere away from the Loft, like he had run away or something and Roger still visited him... but the ending, and those haunting words just made it all fit so sadly (and a bit eerily) together. I'm so glad you're writing as frequently as you are! I am loving all this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing. I had tears coming up in my eyes and the twist was shocking. I went back and realized that I probably could have picked up on it but I thought he was in a mental hospital or something. At one point I was thinking homeless... Hm. Great fic though. I loved it, it really captured their relationship and their personalities. I'll admit that Mark's line from Goodbye, Love has basically haunted me since the first time I heard it. The hurt and terror in his voice... It always enthralls me to read fics about it. |