Please write a sequel to this. I would love to know what happens

Omg are you serious? You left it there?! That is unacceptable! Ok so, I saw your one author’s note so I know you know that you really need a beta or something. I would just like to point out a couple things to you if you ever come back to writing, just as an attempt to help. First, try grammarly. There is a free version and it’ll really help with misspelling and wrong word usage. Second, you used threw a lot in place of through. Your in place you’re. And a few other words used wrong. Plus punctuation was a big issue. The good thing about writing is that we can learn from things we do wrong and work on making them better. As I said, I’m not yelling you this to be mean, just trying to help. Good luck with anything you decide to write in the future if you decide to come back. One thing you should write though? The companion to this. Even if it’s just a one shot or two shot with the confrontation between Bella and Xavier and a little lemony goodness between Bella and Paul to solidify their imprint. :) I also hope you might finish you Bella/Sam fic. I will be back to read the Bella/Emmett one later. I’m on a Bella/Paul kick right now, devouring all that I can find.

The injustice that is jasper Whitlock/hale/Cullen

Well that explains things.

I hope she's not brain dead... Pull it together Paul!

Holy Christ on a cracker Batman! She died?! Oh Paul, do give up hope Hun.

I can't believe Jake let her go! And yea they had a great date, but hello, he may eat her. OK he won't, but others might. And now she's crashed.

Yeah, bring big brother along, that'll be awesome. Paul, where are you dude?

Haha girl power!

And so the drama gets deeper. Maybe had ANY of the guys said something to her, she wouldn't be dating a vampire.

Time to take back what's yours and do some grovelling.

Uuhhhh, maybe someone should tell Bella.

Slim shady...

Parents have the right to be evil every now and then.

They really should just tell her.