The smart major working intel in the Pentagon, is it Davis?

Very interesting story. I like Sheplantis stories and enjoyed the fact that this one is from Atlantis' POV. Keep up the good work!

Its almost another of Control Room stories :)Very good piece, you have a knack for creating intriquing foes for our heroes.

Nice story. I kinda like the relationship Sheppard has with the city. One thing, though, Teyla's son's name is spelt Torren.

This is a fanstatic story. I love how you have Altantis worrying about what is happening to John - especially at the end where you have John and Altantis communicating with each other.

This story is very well written, and I hope not only will you write more stories, but that some of them may be about John and Altantis communicating with each other.

Thank you.

Another great story.

Really well written showing the great team dynamics and Sheps connection to Atlantis

Like the part that Lorne is getting like his CO!

Another little gem - thanks.

Loved the whump of course and the voice of Atlantis just seemed so right. Comfort in the infirmary with the team camping there waiting for Sheppard to wake was good. Nice story.

You did it again and wrote a wonderful story! I loved how the city thought about Sheppard and worried about him. Superb!

Wow! Nice :) Love the equal opportunity whumping *hugs Rodney the most* *crunch*