Bella's reaction to Edward is a bit odd considering the traumatic event she went through. Almost sinister. Is Bella okay?

Hmmm...I kinda think she might have done it. Killed Lauren as well as her Dad and maybe even others.

Well, this should be interesting. They already have a connection and now she'll be staying at his house. Hmm

Great story. Thank you for sharing.

sorry, but this is already so unbelievable that i can’t keep going. there is no way any police dept would have let bella go home with one of their detectives. first they havent even cleared her as a suspect, which she definitely would be, second that’s a huge way to screw up any trial or movement in the case once they do catch the killer. it’s also opening them up to a lawsuit themselves. she would have been held in police custody while they searched for any family she had.

Too much smut. Occasionally and emotional kisses, smut or heated moments don't bother me but here its just too much of useless heat that it sidetracked the story and is too virtual. i think hardly any witness would kiss or jump on a detectives bones the first night she is there evem though the detective is the Edward Cullen!

Aww so cute. I'm glad that worked out for them :)

That ties up a few more things. That little moment between Edward and Mike made me laugh.

Ah, Riley. I'm still wondering if it's really over

Well now, who's the guy?

Ooh so it's Charlie's kid.. But what else is going on here?

Oh my god!

Oh who's the creep?

Oooooh

Ah, murkier and murkier