thats pretty douchie to just break the camera xD they are in the new constantly anyway.

Wow this chapter really was entertaining and interesting I kind a like how the relationship between Raven and Peter’s is growing too, but I was also shocked at the ending that Peter actually did except maphisto’s deal and not only that but I’m still so surprised to see a Raven’s mother’s back alive and everything’s kind of like to normal like something I would’ve happened can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter because I’m pretty sure this will become very very interesting for now one, oh and excellent work by the way, keep up the good work on the story! Stay safe.

Danm dude this chapter was dark and shocking, That fight with Kraven and red X and the way spidey was about to finish him ...danm this sure suprised me, and it kinda makes feel sad in the part rachel seeing peter with mj and her sadness when she’s outisde the school

But apart from that, That last part where harry’s face is burned and looked like the green goblin...that shocked me ..cant wait for the next chapter

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uhhh starfire or raven found him. pick one, stop flipping thier names lol

Awesome Fan Fic. All caught up and find it very interesting. Peter/Raven relationship YAY!

Hey it’s about time you posted the chapter and it’s ok if it’s short I understand
And I was expecting Raven ..but I think I know who this is

Anyway hope in the future you get for time to work on the story I can’t wait to see raven’s reaction when she see’s peter with MJ

Overall this chapter’s good it was entertaining to read even if it was short but it’s good.

I like it can't wait to see more chapter's

A bizarre adventure has already happened in this story! DON'T PUT THE READERS THROUGH ANOTHER ONE RIGHT AFTER THE FIRST ONE FINALLY GETS DONE WITH! PLEASE, AUTHOR PERSON! HAVE MERCY ON OUR MISBEGOTTEN SOULS! I BEG OF YOU!

So...Justice League Unlimited Cadmus ArcMarvel Comics Civil War ArcInjustice: Gods Among Us ArcDark Nights DC Metal Arc where the Evil versions of Batmen are replaced by an Evil version of Supermanconfusing as HELLJust stick with the Justice League Unlimited Cadmus ArcA Question movie should be madeTHINK ABOUT HOW BADASS IT WOULD BE!Especially if it was followed up by a Huntress movieESPECIALLY IF THAT WAS FOLLOWED UP BY A QUESTION/HUNTRESS MOVIE!You really should have stuck with the Justice League Unlimited Cadmus Arc.

Ooh! I see where this is all of a sudden going! Although...the time skips are going to be somewhat annoying, BUT this is going to be REALLY cool if I'm right about where this is going.

Huzzah! And, if I'm not interpreting the description incorrectly, we're going to get a Raven/Spider-Man relationship story from this story. Well, that is, if the author ever gets around to writing the story again.

can't she just teleport the fuck out?

Any chance that this will be updated again?

Wow nice work can’t wait for the next one

This chapter was good I like the school fight between spidey and the fake punisher and I loved that part of raven saying to spidey “your my hero” that was really cute

I rate this chapter 9/10

Oh. You're merging the worlds instead of leaving them as distinct universes. Well... that kind of defeats the purpose then. Lame. Could've been good, but instead just... pointless.