This review is coming rather late, but had to write. This was very well written! Writing in 2nd person is very difficult, but you nailed it! This was a very sad, but beautiful story.

Excellent description of Nelson/HJ...Many fic writers ignore the fact that masochism hurts.

This fic is amazing. It describes the mental state of the characters and the tone of the GN. You are wonderful.

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Excellent. You've expanded on a strong theme in Watchmen, the idea that simultaneously every man and no man can be a superhero. Choosing Captain Metropolis, the idealistic one, the one who's in it to make the world a better place, to convey the slow decay of everything, of the team, of themselves, of the world, was the perfect choice, and you've nailed his voice. I liked his interactions with Hooded Justice.

I loved the part about Silhouette and the Comedian arguing over teeth in an ashtray. It shows just how off-kilter everything had become, because it's completely sick, but at the same time it's funny (especially when I imagined the Comedian punching a shark in the face.)