I loved the ending sentence so much! :)

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One of - if not, THE - best Watson/Holmes stories I've read. Absolutely adored it. So well written. I loved you use of language and dialogue, you portray the characters so well.

Really, this is just so great. I loved it! _

Gorgeous! I love it. The lines about not belonging and being kept were beautiful.

I dont know if I should cry or laugh.

Im going to settle for both.

Brilliant mate.

Aw Watson! His last line was SOO CUTE!

Such a good story, i lved it!

Oh my god. I cried XD I really did.

This was amazing. Not to mention your vocabulary and grammar brought me near a mental orgasm. Thank you for being literate! :D

This was such a bittersweet story. Oh,dear Jesus, did I love that last line. 3

beautiful descriptions and dialogue. lovely read.

*sniffle* so emotional and so deep it made me cry. very special. thanks for sharing

Very passionate! Congrats, its a very good drabble! Hope u write more )

Oh... very beautiful indeed. Loved it. So much raw emotion.

Beautiful.

It is not a common thing for me to be at a loss for words at the end of a story. Usually I have some critique of it hanging in the back of my mind, some comment or jest to make. But at the end of this, I had nothing. You've made me feel the depravity of the characters, the heartfelt agony of the situation; and after that there's not much to say I'm afraid.

Well done.

Oh man, that last line broke me. In a good way! This was so dark and intense... and then so tender... LOVE.

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Omg! wow, trully stunning piece you have here! I know the movie did not mention alot the fact that Holmes was sorta a real junkie back in the books. But yeah I could tottaly see him going to these ghastly measures for Watson. I did not like Mary at all and felt HolmesxWatson should have hooked up from the very begining. Aww,...we fangirls can sure dream can't we as I luv it all! as I hope the sequel will have equel epic moments between the two as these one did or maybe even more these time leaving out all the girls..and living fromm for some fun!XD

And yes, some Beta's are indeed agressive fish...more like sharks! But naw I did not see anything wrong with the story at all as it was simply lovely. Thank you for posting:3

I barely exhaled while reading through the entire thing. Your writing is so compelling, powerful, and yes, addicting. The "climax" was so frenzied and wild (as it should be) that I read it several times to stabilize myself and not dissolve into a nervous breakdown. I'm not sure what to say about the last line; it was somewhat of a letdown, as far as memorable last lines go, but at the same time I think it works. It's not that the line didn't fit the story as a whole, but it just felt like the page cut off the last few lines, as if it shouldn't have ended there. All in all, however, amazing work. I'm left breathless.