Loved it, but wish it was longer or had a sequel

wow that's a good story

I love the story

Absolutely wonderful

hmmmm... its beautiful:) I love it. please more thats was pleasure read it.

you should totally make a chaptered story out of this

Amazingly delicious! :D

:D 3

sequel to this story please love it so far thanks

sequeeelll! definatly needs sequel!

The story is well-written save for some minor typographical errors. Many HP fans would no doubt be shocked by the characters' bold and aggressive behavior. Although this is strictly For Adults Only, it wasn't cheap like other smuts I've read before. The plot was well-developed. It started with Severus talking with his real mother, an elfin queen. It reminds me of "The Talk" between Burt and Kurt Hummel of Glee, only racier. The story progresses into a series of Snape's sexual adventures with different partners to find his "Mates". There was the issue of incest that I did not expect at all, between Fred and George Weasley. Shocking, but, nonetheless pleasant. The climax was a ménage à trois between Severus, Harry and Remus. The words matched the emotions the characters were feeling at the time. The author makes you believe that it is true and not just a story, well, except for the magic involved. It ended in a pleasant way, with Severus talking to his mother and telling her that he found his mates.

I'm not a big Harry Potter fan, I only read the first book. This is a good story that needs a sequel. Kudos to the author for making this fanfic. Until next time, because I need to take a cold shower.

I love this story but it begs to have a sequel written. and so do i. this was bloody brilliant so please write a sequel

Wow.

...nose bleed of epic porportions!

I have 3 words

WOW

HOT

MORE?

Would like to know what happens in the future :)

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