Reviews for Serpent, Soarer, and Guardian |
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Andoma chapter 5 . 1/14/2016 Has it really been so long...? Been five years since an update, I started reading this when their was only one chapter up... Well, even if it never sees completion, this is still an amazing fic. |
James Birdsong chapter 5 . 5/14/2015 Excellent story |
justsomerealguy chapter 5 . 3/18/2015 Never gonna be updated... And it was so good. :( |
Watford chapter 5 . 6/21/2013 This is pretty cool so far. I really like how you've handled the characters acclimating to their new forms and environment. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. |
tuatara chapter 3 . 9/21/2012 Well, I was quite interested in this story, but you utterly lost me by descending into eyeroll-inducing Kagome bashing. And I don't even have any particular attachment to her. I just cannot stand character bashing, period. So disappointing. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28/2012 Just two itsy-bitsy things. 1. It seemed like they rolled over for Sesshomaru pretty fast.(Dog pun intended) 2. Sesshomaru never told Rei his name, but she knew it. ' Great story and idea. Keep it up! |
graypheonix chapter 5 . 5/1/2012 Well, an update to this concept would be hard, but quite interesting and well appreciated. COntinue to update, ja ne. |
Duquette7 chapter 4 . 3/17/2012 I've spent a great part of the last few days reading and exploring your stories, and I must say I like this chapter the best by far of everything you've written. Make no mistake, I like everything so far, the dark Jade works in particular, but this is so original and interesting it takes the cake. I really hope you continue this sometime soon. P.s. adding the lance was an inspired touch. |
nased0 chapter 5 . 1/3/2012 Good chapter, I can't wait until the Children meet the Inuyasha's group. And how Kagome will react to the time travellers from her future and to the tale about the biblical end of the world? There are some important questions, is Kagome's era (late nineties) the time before the Second Impact, which occurred on September 13th, 2000? And how to resolve this situation? Defeat Naraku, complete the Jewel and wish for the Angels disappearance? Because preventing the Katsuragi Expedition by a bunch of freaks would put them against the modern military and negotiating with the Seele's controlled goverment is not an option. |
Cobrawolf Meiji chapter 5 . 12/25/2011 Another fine chapter, keep up the good work. |
Yoshomo chapter 4 . 1/31/2011 Stumbled onto this today & Im actually impressed. Only a few miss spellings here and there. Thought it'd be more focused on asuka & kanna developing a relationship of some kind but I've no complaints about how things are going so far. Very much looking forward to whenever the next chapter comes out. |
EverEternal chapter 4 . 12/14/2010 Just found this and I gotta say I'm liking it. The action is well done and the character introspection makes for a very interesting read, I honestly can't wait for the next piece. Cheers! |
jormundgandr chapter 4 . 11/30/2010 awesome storydude |
Weapon-VII chapter 4 . 11/28/2010 Sweet you updated. This story is going good so far. Cant wait till the next chapter. |
Rc1212 chapter 4 . 11/28/2010 That was just Pure Awesome! Liked the idea about Asuka's acid. Great work witht he characters, like with Asuka. Very good job with her. That fight at the end and Shinji getting the lance was just epic win all the way! Looking forward to seeing how this changes things, can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! |