Reviews for The End of the Beginning
lilyoftheval5 chapter 7 . 9/1/2010
Pity, really good story you got here,,,
fubukifangirl chapter 7 . 8/31/2010
TT 'sniffle' It was getting good too!
Aquagirl Two-Four-OH chapter 6 . 8/17/2010
Hey BlackendWings

I really enjoyed your story. You've achieved mixing a good side of Ciel, & still managed to keep the charecter. I hope you keep updating soon, so I can continue reading !

- AquagirlTwoFourOH
caeli chapter 6 . 8/4/2010
Wonderful story, I can't wait to read more.

Good job, keep on!
Meghan-Black01 chapter 6 . 7/27/2010
I love the story.

Sebastian's dad is as sly as Sebastian XD

I hope there's some CielxSebas in the next chapter please update soon. :)
Midnight Marquis chapter 6 . 7/15/2010
Ahh~ he still doesn't know... Sebby didn't tell him, so he doesn't know...

Nice story, by the way, and hope you update soon.
A Perfect Devil chapter 6 . 7/14/2010
saw this linked on 4chan and it's way better than what i had expected. :D
Soot chapter 6 . 7/14/2010
aww. poor little ciel. i'd be blind to it too! hahahaha. ciel you are not alone with that one! great story! please continue!
ShakeUrKittyy chapter 6 . 7/14/2010
Ah-mazing. :D I love how Ciel is still in denial about liking Sebastian. You should keep drawing that out. Update soon, :D
PERMANENT DEACTIVATED ACCOUNT chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
Sebastian is probably bashing his head against a wall over Ciel's idiocy.

Thanks for the update, hope to see another soon!

And for an unbeta'd chapter, it was pretty good.
azure sea chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
hi! :)

i've read your story until now and i find it quite interesting what you've cooked up. XD

i love the idea of their soul bound, because i don't want ciel to die. it's cool that he also has power now.

if you like, i can continue correcting your story. i've beta-ed before, so i think i'm not bad at it.

english is not my first language, but i did graduated with english as a major subject. and i was studying translation for a while, with the languages english, german and chinese.

you can contact any time. just tell me if you want me to beta it. :)

azure sea
rainyday chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
I love this story!The plot is really interesting,so keep up the good work!I can't wait to find out more,so update soon please! o
a.Arty chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
dawww Ciel's jus so cute n innocent... /

n Sebby's as cool as ever~ woots for him...haha u angels...dont be jealous~ XD

cant wait for the next chap~
LovelyWickedDescet chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
Hm.. it wasn't that bad, the grammar barely had any mistakes. I pretty sure you'll find a good beta by the time the next chapter is finished. Good luck hunting though.

Hm.. I wonder if Ciel will ever figure it out. I'm sure he'll figure it out when Sebastian has him pinned down somewhere making him moan. 'snickers' I liked the chapter a nice addition and an interesting expilination upon demon birth.

I can't believe what Yen Press has done to the manga can you. Such horrid translations and most of the characters already don't feel much like themselves anymore. Kuroshitsuji doesn't deserve such treatment.
MsAnime4ever chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
Yatta! Another chappy!

Poor Sebastian...he has to deal with an incredulous Ciel!:X

Looking forward to the next part!
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