i am crying this was so well done

I've just recently got into this series, and this was an awesome addition to a really fantastic set of stories you've got here! I'll be the first to admit that I'm a sucker for Bluestreak!angst, so this was pretty much a guaranteed win/win for me, but what's so fantastic here is how you've managed to show such extreme grief through an outsider's perspective, which ramps up the intensity and makes things even sadder ... if that is really possible! ;)

As I said, this was great! Thanks for posting!

That was... very sad. Hope Blue will be alright, everyone's worried for him. Excellent fic.

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i think you did a good job in making this a sad story :(

Ohh so achingly sad! :(

*remains in blissful denial refusing to believe Prowl died.*

This story brought tears to my eyes so bittersweet.

I liked the way you described Bluestreak's changes in behaviour. The narration of events really showed how much Prowl's death has affected him, and the transition from talkative and cheerful to... well, like this, was really nicely done.

Poor Blue... Hope he's all right.

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aww poor Blue :(

it is hard on everyone but he's taking it the worse.

but where has he gone ? He better not have done anything stupid.

good beginning, can't wait to see what you come up with next.