One hell of a cliff hanger to leave the series off on wouldn't yah say?

Now that I'm a little under halfway done rereading this story I thought I'd leave a more detailed review, I'd just like to start this review out by saying this is a enormous inspiration when it comes down to characterizing Fang the sniper. I have been with this story since it's fifth chapter and I can easily say it was one of the first fanfictions that really inspired me to experimenting with preexisting characters within literature- I believe it was one of the firsts I had read on this website overall, as well.

You've done an amazing job at keeping well known characters within their original personalities but you've also developed memorable personalities for some of the more unknown cast, using what is already known and going above and beyond with fleshing out everything about them.

I don't even know where to begin with your fan-characters, they all have interesting designs without making them bland or too overpowered with highly distinctive personalities from each other. Hell, even if they're set to be killed off within hardly two chapters you've done a great job adding to their designs. Instead of just going,"well shit, here's one hedgehog let's make another" you managed to tie together two characters by blood and allowing more character developments to under go.

Down to your powerful descriptions you keep it from dragging on but still, you manage to leave a vivid and memorable images in others minds by your descriptions as well as scenery. You even manage not to use repetitive language even when describing a constant thing or being throughout the entire story.

I would go on about the plot and whatnot or just particularly everything about this particular fanfiction haha but I'll save that for my other review, I'll probably be posting this one as well as one for the very last chapter. I'm really glad I revisited this fanfiction.

Lol "Come at me, bro." Looking forward to the next chapter!

Ah yes, the hatred between two brothers finally comes into the light to show how truly deep the hatred runs. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Not bad, Blank. We got to see a more in depth look at Digit's backstory and a good character development chapter. The problem I mainly see is with the grammar. (Oh ah, shock and amaze/sarcasm)

There is a few places that seemed to "run-on" and could use a few punctuation marks or rewritten sentences here and there. One of the biggest mistakes however, happens close to the beginning of the chapter.

"Heh doesn't look like it'll do much here though." commented Gear snidely under his breath.

"What was that?" asked Gear suddenly, not quite catching what he said.

Gear just asked himself about what he said... need I go on?

All in all, it is a good chapter that deserves to be here; Just double check your work, kay.

As always, I patiently await the next chapter.

-Vincent A. Azerite

Shit's about to get very real. I can understand Digit's hate for his brothers...well, not really, but yeah.

A chapter for Digit fans, and I applaud you for going so deep with this character. But personally, I wanted a fight scene, as I thought Bruce's introduction chapter was good enough time on Digit's background- but hey, you really took the cake! :D Excellent drama (good drama xD) and conflict among the brothers. Gear is a jerk and Digit is unstable. Thank god Bruce turned out okay xD

Still waiting on more of Fang and Mina :D

-LordCooler

Damn its taken me forever, You wouldn't believe the shit im up to! Anyways, loved this chapter. The bouncing bullet things was a neat segment and humanizing the enemies with a pistol duel was cool.

Decent chapter Blank. some character development, with an action chapter coming up.

I would have preferred a canon character like Fang or Nic to do the sneaking around, but I guess Mia is a good choice for this kind of operation.

That ending was... awesome. I cannot wait for the next chapter, but I must. 'sigh'

-Vincent A. Azerite

*Jaw drop*

-LordCooler

And so the conflict between Digit and his brothers just go more intense. Awesome! Can't wait for the next chap!

Shit just got real!

Sucks to be you, Fang!

Looks like these three are going to get some action!

I know you're already like, into the 40th chapter or something but I just wanted to say how awesome your introduction was. I don't read a lot of Fang based stuff, but this sounded really interesting :)

~Shot through the heart, and you're to blame. You give love a bad name~, was the only thing I thought of when I read the last line of the chapter.

It will be intriguing to see what developments happen with everything that is happening. What gear will Digit bring? How will Nic's group take care of the target? Will Wraith join the team after awhile? These questions and more float around in my head and makes me want more of the story. Thank you.

I await the next chapter.

-Vincent A. Azerite