Hee hee loved Prowl's devious mind.

Oh my. I was just like hanging onto every word, silently accusing Prowl to be at least a little wary, relieved when they did not get abducted... and then the ending gave me a laughing attack. XD This was simply awesome! I love how you wrote Bluestreak there :)

"I died..." the human continued.
She WHAT? Bluestreak screeched.
"The day my bunny ran away."

LOL xD
My cheeks hurt from laughing so much! Well done! w
JTL

LMFAO! Poor Bluestreak! xDDDD That was amazing! Oh Primus, that was awesome! I was hesitant about reading this, but now I'm happy I did! x3

This was such a lovely and humorous fic.

I alwqays enjoy reading about the pair Bluestreak and Prowl and their interactions. I hope you will have more fics like this one in the future.

Keep Up The EXCELLANT Work!

(_) Yokai

lol, poor Blue, he's so adorable!

I love the little inputs of Spike's opinion on Prowl's 'Be Logical' and 'Because it is illogical' to a parent's most famous lines, because I can tottally see that! I will hence-fourth forever associate Prowl with a scolding parent! I thought it was a little weird the human girl was using all the ghost sterotypes and all the dramatic pauses, but I genuinely dind't see the ending comming, which I loved!

Loved it! Honestly, this was great fun - truly creepy at times, and a great insight into the character of all involved. Thank you for a well-written, engaging and entertaining story.

*mad cackling* Love it! What a prank! And effective towards Bluestreak's problem too!

That was hilarious! Was totally not expecting it to be a set up by Prowl! Awesome.
Bluestreak was appropiately panicked and then bewildered and that the bouncing out of the litte girl certainly puts things into perspective. You got me thinking this WAS going to turn into a ghost story. Prowl's patience is well done and those two likened phrases hit the mark perfectly: i mean the 'behave' and 'because i say so' parts. Great :D

It's funny, on my first read through, I really took the story for (what I'm sure) it's supposed to be- A nice, sunny story about Prowl teaching poor impressionable Blue not to beleive everything he hears, and not to judge a book by its cover to boot. My second time through, something niggled at the back of my brain, but I couldn't figure out what it was. It wasn't till the third time reading it that it clicked.

The family is actually a group of ghosts manifesting on the material plane- they mean no harm, and Prowl enlists their help to assuade Bluestreaks paranoia. Why does he do this? Because Prowl is a manifestation too! It's all part of his plan to acclimatize Blue to the weird and wonderful for if he ever must reveal his nature!

Sp yeah, my brain decided to pretty much ignore the whole point of the story (and what a lovely little story it was, the ending with the letters amused my greatly) and make up its own point instead. Sorry about that.

The actual review: I love the way you write Blue- all sweet and adorable and chatty without creating block-paragraphs on the screen. The way he interacts with Prowl is adorable, and how Spike picks up on the mentor/child relationship with them even as Blue himself doesn't was a nice touch. Likening Prowl's various phrases with a human parents was also giggle-worthy- I actually kind of wish it could be used in other places, but I'm not sure of how nor where. Tis too bad really.

Anyways, yes. This has amused me in all sorts of wonderful ways. My thanks to your skills. :D

Love it! Oh that was good.

but... I still can't figure out... were they just strange humans? or were they ghosts?

LOLZ!

I loved it!

Very humorous. I loved the way the girl was playing on the ghost stereotypes, especially with her dialogue, and Prowl's quite the clever mech.

Hahaha, Prowl having insane stalkers who require restraining orders amuses me to no end!

And Blue being scared of ghosts is adorable! These naughty, naughty twins!

He thought, briefly, about radioing for back-up—

*rotfl* I can just imagine the face of whoever is on duty when Blue radios "help us, we're being abducted by a ghost!"

And Prowl's a soap opera fan! *giggles* That's so cute!

She’s brought us home for dinner! We’re the main course!

*rotfl* *rotfl*

Hahaha, so Prowl arranged the whole thing! I hadn't seen that coming at all.

This story has been great fun to read!