I've just stumbled over this story, and have to say that I really like it. Since it's been a long time since your last update, I'd like to know whether you plan on continuing this story, or not... I'd really like to know how it continues.

As for your note at the end of chapter 13, I have to admit that Hatter doesn't seem as mad as he could be. In fact, he's pretty sociable, I think. I like him, either way; you created his personality to be easier to understand for Alice. What I love about your story is that you pick up on other stories, for example the Peter Pan thing. Those moments give this story even more creativity, and for me, who has never read Lewis Carroll's books, they make it easier to follow and build on something.

So, I really hope you continue this story. If you rewerote it, I would read it again in its new version, but I'd also continue reading if you didn't revise it.

Nice job. Great two chapters

This is a great chapter it explains everything! nice job!

this probably isnt exactly constructive because this is an entriely positive review. ive just found your story and i love it! even down to the riddles divided over the chapters, they're quirky and really suit this story. and i am loving all the references (maybe its just because i get them all idk?) but that is a nice bonus. it was great having 10 chapters to read in a whole sitting and now im not sure how im going to take waiting for the rest (no pressure i know how bad it is balancing everything especially where academia is involved). but you have a very refined style and a high standard of writing, just thank you and keep writing. x

Great.

I wonder what the job is? Great chapter XD at Freddy Krueger reference!

Very cool. Apology accepted

Awesome. Certainly good. _

Woah, that was something! AWESOME! Keep it up!

This is so insanely interesting that I'm glad there was an update today! And I remember this so I didn't have to re-read. Bravo!

I'm just loving this, plain and simple.

Cool, this is really good...

He said, "You'll sentence me to six years in prison." If it was true, then the judge would have to make it false by sentencing him to four years. If it was false, then he would have to give him six years, which would make it true. Rather than contradict his own word, the judge set the man free.

I heard that some where and i know the answer its gonna kill me if i don't remember..

good chapter love it

Excellent

Ok this has to be one of the better Alice in Wonderland stories I have come across. It is vary well writen, and I like the way it is more your own with the way you have puled diffrent aspects of the diffrent versions of Alice in Wonderland.

And I got the Judoon reference! Doctor who right?

i didn't get the Judoon reference until the end. Oh, the answer to the riddle is that he said "You shall sentence me to six years in prison. Just don't say that if you are sentenced! This story keeps getting better and better! I sort of guessed that the woman was the Duchess..

No, I'm not familiar with Judoon and won't cheat by looking it up! But I'm so glad to see this story continuing. Nice chapter, thanks!