Thanks for the very good read a little deep though but thanks again

This story is beautiful. I love how you write them, so in character and so much more at the same time. This really adds both to the Mentalist universe and to my own headcanons. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

Again, beautiful. More than a team, a family. More than friendship, a species of love. Thank you for writing this.

I loved this and "An Exchange" back when I first read them. But I recently watched 3x7 Red Hot again. After Jane pulled the stolen toupee ***out of the couch***, I just had to say, "Ha! It's not just fanon, it's canon - Jane hides things in the couch!

*dies* I love this team friendship-love thing you have going. It's so sweet! Please write more! It's really hard to find Mentalist fics that have good team friendship (lol or this brand of team love) in. Loving it!

Beautiful.

For some reason, I adore this sentence: 'He basks in their happiness like a cat in the sun.' Something about it is just so Jane.

I'm kind of stunned, I can't really find the words. There's something so sad and strange about this, but it reads very peacefully. This story made me feel things I don't quite understand, so thank you for the skilful storytelling.

Wow~ I REALLY loved this story It doesn't say that it's completed but I was just wondering if it really was or wasn't. Normally, with a story this good, I'd ask for you to continue but then...some people don't want to or don't have an idea of what to do for the next chapter if they do and then, there are some who do but it just doesn't turn out right.

In other words, I'm hoping that you make another chapter buut~ it would also be good if you stopped here as well :)

Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~ your two fics were so freaking adorable! And so sweet, Jane is slowly getting a family back :)

Wow, this sequel is even more potent, and I love the way you incorporated and developed all the symbolism from the first story. _ (Also, my question has been answered. :P)

This is sad and beautiful and wonderful all at once, amazing work.

"Grace asked, looking Jane over and contemplating how difficult it would be to find a toddler leash that could fit him."

lol, seriously.

This was a great story. Kind of sad and tragic, yet comforting at the same time. Lovely work. Well done!

Also loved this part:

"He giggled in glee and used it in interrogation until Lisbon made him stop."

oh my... what a wonderful little chaptr. a little confusing by it's meaning in a way, kind of sweet but strange but i realy liked it

:) A stuffed penguin makes everything better... I just had to say that!

This is a wonderfully written story on each of the team, and I enjoyed reading all the moments with each of them! :D

AW! I love this. Healing and solace (and a Jane/Cho moment!) This story was wonderful. Lots of symbolism, you must have worked very hard. Beautiful story.

A really nice story. I enjoyed reading it.