this was good. i hope there will be more

For one thing, I am very confused about is: when did they even mate. I don't remember reading about that.

The story is really good. Please update soon! And keep up the good work on your writing! -TashaLyn13-

i say that this story is really good

my ideas for what would happen next would be

Option 1:

to have kags and sess get in a fight (mostly likely over sex or something) and her getting pissed off and running out. well from their there are three options 1 have her kidnapped/hit by a car 2 have her get attacked/raped by another guy or 3 have her start to pretend she doesnt want to be with him anymore. all of the options lead to different things and such but in the end its all about sess proving that he loves her, then when he saves her/gets her back tells her he loves her, everything gets cheesey, blah blah blah

Option 2:

continue going cheesey, have sess start to open up to her more, have them get closer spend more time together but eventually you have to mix that up by having someone try to break them up or something but in the end she relises that hes the only one she truely loves and their made for eachother, blah blah blah

Option 3: would be that he does something that freaks her out, like going full demon on her and that scares her so she runs

and i say thats about all your options, personally i would suggest option 1 but its your choice and if you want any more details or suggestions or anything then just message back (:

and i hope you update soon

and there is nothing wrong with a story being cheesey

update soon please and if you want my ideas on what should happen then message back (:

Seriously? "Did he like me?". Way to be blunt.

Chapter 15 was a repeat, I'm sure I've read that chapter before already. :) just letting you know.

i really like your story, usually i don't like the sesshomaru and kagome pairing, but this story has made me enjoy it

update soon please !

this story is awesoem love it and shall read it eveyday you update and shall review at the end yay you!

Wow this is really good! I love it! Can't wait to read more so please up-date soon so I can give you a long winded review full of compliments at the end of the story!

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. cant wait for more and see the relation ship between kagome and sesshomaru blossom and have a family of their own. and is there a conection betweem kagome's mother rin and sesshomaru's ward rin

Wow, this is really really good! It had me laughing a couple times and my sis looked at me like i was crazy! Can't wait for an update!

oh crap...inuyasha's dead.

Damn, wow this is really good so far! I know this is only chapter 1 outta 14, but I still say that this story is really awesome!

Why hasn't more people reviewed this? You are certainly not deterred by lazy readers! Hahaha, good plot and your structure is very promising. I have not read your entire work but I plan to go and read again. Continue!